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2009-11-20 7:44 am
she spends a lot of money on clothes. 她用很多錢買衫
she will be pessimistic when she in the face of difficult. 當她遇到困難時,她會變得悲觀.
she is swimming in the middle of sea. 她正在海中心游泳.
she still works hard even if she has headache. 即使她頭痛,但她工作仍然很勤力.
do you serve free beverage? 你們提供免費飲料嗎?
which ingredient does this cake has? 這個蛋糕有邊種材料呀?

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2009-11-20 7:16 pm
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She spent a lot of money on clothes.
用spent因為你可以形容她買衫的情況已經必然是過去的事或已經發生了的事。不過這只是實際應用寫法,如果你只是為作一句present tense可以用spends.

She becomes pessimistic when she is faced with difficulties.

She is swimming in the middle of the ocean.
很難講解sea和ocean的分別,因為中國人用詞海和海洋是面見大少的名詞,但英語人並不如此簡單。只可以死記吧。Swim一定是在ocean。

Even though she is having a headache, she still works hard.
跟據你的中文句子結構寫出英文。如果技術和文法上可能,翻譯不應把原文的句子結構由兩句變為一句。在寫法上亦有作用,你是想讀者先看到她的頭痛(感覺)還是先看她努力工作 (結果)。我看來你是想讀者感覺她的苦況才引導讀者看她是多麼努力,英文中間的,便是讓讀者停一停,讓你帶他們轉過來看她正面的努力。

Do you serve free beverages?都ok, 可以考慮Do you serve free drinks?

What ingredients does this cake have?因為一個蛋糕不只有一種材料,中文材料好似單數,實際暗藏眾數。
2009-11-20 8:18 am
She spends a lot of money on clothes.

She is pessimistic when she IS FACING difficulties.

She is swimming in the middle of THE sea.

She still works hard even THOUGH she is having a headache.

Do you serve free beverageS?

WHAT ingredientS does this cake have?
2009-11-20 8:02 am
she spends a lot of money on buying clothes.
she will be pessimistic when she encounters problems.
she is swimming in the midst of the a sea.
she still works hard even if she has headache. Right!
Do you serve with free beverages?
What materials does the cake have?


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