煩請幫忙將以下文字翻譯成簡短的英文. 謝謝!

2009-11-19 8:16 am
煩請幫忙將以下文字翻譯成簡短的英文. 謝謝!

過去一年我與Team A的溝通比往年有明顯改善, 透過與他們的討論, 令我更能夠掌握工作上嘅技巧及注意事項. 除buying team以外, 希望在未來日子我亦能夠對其他team的工作有更深的認知, 從而可以擴濶思維及使到整體的工作更暢順.
另外, 我希望透過經驗的累積, 我能再減短我在決策時用來思考的時間, 好讓我能有更多時去處理更多的工作.

回答 (3)

2009-11-19 6:19 pm
✔ 最佳答案
In the past year, my relationship (建議中文用:關係而不單是溝通communication) with Team A has improved significantly. Through interaction (建議中文用:聯繫而不是討論discussion) with them, I become more aware of the details and proficient in skills to handle the job. Besides the Buying Team, I hope to learn more about other teams. In such doing, I may broaden my thoughts to streamline the overall work processes.
In addition, I hope to accumulate these experience to reduce the time required for decision making, so that I may have more time to handle more tasks. (建議修飾:處理更多重要(important)的工作)
2009-11-20 12:47 am
Obviously, I had had a better communication with Team A this year than last year. After my discussions with them, I have known more about the skills and matters needing attention of working together. Except the buying team, I hope I can know more bout how the other teams have worked in the future, in order to expand my thought and to smoothen the overal working.
Moreover, I hope I can shorten my time used for thinking ideas and decisions through my experience, so that I can have more time to deal with other tasks.


P.S.Hope I can help u but what is "buying team"?
P.P.S. Plz check the grammar yourself, I am not good at grammar.
參考: me and my dictionary
2009-11-19 6:55 pm


(Version 1)
Translation on words

In the past one year, the communication between Team A and me have noticeable improvements when compared with previous years. By means of discussion with Team A, I have grasped a better understanding and know-how on my job. Besides the buying team, I also hope that I can have better understanding on other teams in the coming future, so as to broaden my thinking for further job smoothening.
Furthermore, through the accumulation of experience, I hope I can shorten the time on making decisions, so that I can have more time for other work.

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(Version 2)
Translation on meaning

Team A and I have visible improvements on communications in the past one year. Through meetings and discussions, I managed to master the key skills and knowledge about my job. Besides the buying team, I also wanted to have chances to understand other teams so that I can be on the right track for improvement. By getting myself more experienced over time, I hope I can produce quicker decisions in the coming days, so that I could have more time for other jobs.


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