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Tell me about yourself?

I have two master degrees one in Electrical Engineering and one in Biomedical.I have been working in the engineering sector and serving as an Assistant Engineer for 2 years. My main duty is to prepare engineering drawing for tender and monitor site process.I would describe myself as a team player, at ABC company, one of my jobs was to develop construction programme for development projects. During the process, I worked closely with structure engineer, architect and developer to complete the project on time and within budget. My engineering backgrounds and knowledge in Biomedical enhance my confidence to apply this job.

Why should I hire you?

Well, first of all, I have a master degree in electrical engineering and two years hands-on experience in electrical system design. Secondly, I’m confidence in my knowledge of AutoCAD. Because in my previous job I use AutoCAD to design electrical layout plan for buildings. Finally, my education in Biomedical and clinical attachment in the ABC Hospital enhance my knowledge in XXX.

What particularly attracted you to this job?

When I was serving as an assistant engineer I had the opportunity to visit the hospital that made me realize how important the contribution of engineering to the medical service field. Therefore, I decided to dedicate my engineering knowledge for medical technology.as your company mission is xxx . We share the same goal and I hope I can contribute to this mission by my knowledge and experience in engineering.


Why do you want to leave your current job?

I had worked as an assistant engineer for about two year, but I would like to move on to the medical service field. Therefore, I left the company to study the Biomedical master degree in UK.