無咁多'I'

2009-11-18 10:35 pm
點樣可以改到以下段落,無咁多'I',因為我寫梗personal project,唔想咁多'I'出現
I have always been fascinated by the world of fashion and how garments and accessories shape looks and the fashion trend. I am equally interested about the fashion brand cultural, business and consumer diversity that influences it on a worldwide level. I have always been interested in fashion businesses and how they operate, as well as being fascinated by other languages and cultural differences. To work in the entertainment and build spider-like social network that is invaluable, Garment Merchandiser is my future desirable career.
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點樣可以改到以下段落,無咁多I,因為我寫梗personal project,唔想咁多I出現

回答 (1)

2009-11-22 10:51 pm
✔ 最佳答案
如果你不想要這麼的 I 時,那麼你可以用用 passive voice 的。

例如︰I ate an apple yesterday.
改後︰An apple was eaten by me.

你可以試試 apply 這種方式進你那篇文章的。
參考: Yogi


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