英文請假信 (急)

Dear Principal(知佢姓乜可以直接寫Mr / Ms xx,寫俾班主任都得),

I would like to apply for a one-day leave on December 8, 2009, for my son, John Chan (8) in class 2A has joined (文法錯,一定要改) a Putonghua Speech Competition, and is scheduled to perform at 10:30am that day.

Thank you very much for your concern and look forward to your permission.

Yours Sincerely(＊)
上款用Mr / Ms xx先用Sincerely,唔寫名用Faithfully,
Parent of John Chan

XXXXX

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Dear Principal,

I would like to excuse my son, John Chan (8), in class 2A from class on December 8th, 2009. He has joined a Putonghua Speech Competition and is scheduled to perform at 10:30am.

(I would like to apply for leave on that day.) Delete


Thank you very much for your attention.

Yours Sincerely,

XXXXX
(Name of parent)
Parent of John Chan