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Today I’ll talk about the problems of stray dogs in Taiwan . In recent years, more and more stray dogs appear on the street. Were they stray dogs at the very beginning? Of course not! Some of them were abandoned by their owner. These dogs started to tramp on the street. Only few of them get a new home. Most of them have miserable fate. Because they probably meet the following situations:

First, they could be caught by the dog-catcher. After that, some of them may luckily be adopted. Otherwise, they will get mercy killed.
Second, some dogs may be seized and sold to the dog meat shop. Their destination is to be become a dish on the table.
Finally, car accident is also a deadly weapon to the stray dogs. Lots of dogs have been crashed by cars and become disable, even they survive from the accident. They may face more fierce fights for survival.

We must face up to these problems and solves them. Adopting instead of buying is a great choose. If you have dogs, please take good care of them and never abandon them until they die.

Stray Dogs



We all know dogs are the most faithful
animals of man; however, in recent years, more and more stray dogs can be
seen on the street. Today I’ll talk about the problems of stray dogs in Taiwan. We
wonder how those stray dogs come from. Well, Some of them were discarded
by their owners for various reasons. Among those discarded, only
a few are lucky enough to find a new home by being adopted by good-willed people,
with most of them suffering from diseases and hunger and struggling for their survivals.
Their fates are subject to the following causes.



First, they could be caught anytime by dog-catchers of
government agencies. If nobody claims or adopts them within a certain period,
they will get mercy killing or starve to death sometimes.

Second, some may fall victim to dog meat
shops and be mercilessly killed for their meat.

Finally, Lots of dogs may die from car
accidents while roaming on the street.



In view of the facts above, we must face and
tackle these problems in no time In my opinion. Adopting instead of buying is a
wise policy. If you have dogs, be sure to take good care of them, not leaving
them in the street Your small efforts will help a great deal to improve the
fate of stray dogs.



Thank you.

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Stray Dogs



Today I’ll talk about the problem of stray dogs in Taiwan. In recent years,
there have been more
and more stray dogs found on the street.
Were they stray dogs to begin with? Of course not! Some of them were abandoned
by their owners. These dogs became
stray dogs and most of them had been unfortunate,
only a few dogs found new homes. In most cases
they will encounter the following:



Firstly, they could be caught by the dog
catchers. If nobody adopts them, they will be
put to sleep.

Secondly, some dogs may size to the dog meat shop, and cooked for food.

Finally, car accident is also a serious
problem for stray dogs. A lot of dogs died of accidents.



We must face up to these problems and resolve them.
Adopting instead of buying is a great choice.
If you have dogs, please take care of them.