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1. Hi, I have already scheduled your itinerary for a two-day Hong Kong local tour.

2. There are alot of exciting (深澳d 可以用 exhilirating or adrenaline-pumping) amusement rides that you shouldn't miss out on, for example the crazy roller coaster and the drop tower.

3. At the end of the tour, I will accompany you back to your hotel.

4. I hope I provided you with an extraordinary and memorable journey!

Good luck!

Hello everybody, I have planned a two days itinerary for your Hong Kong trip.( Ocean Park ) – There are a lot of exciting rides which you should not miss, for example, roller coaster, and the jump-off tower.Finally we will escort you back to your hotel.I wish I had brought you an unforgettable and fantastic trip.

002 的回答比較好.

提議:
1) 用 I have completed 或 I have finished 比 I am done 較好聽. 沒有了Planning這個字, 變成了好像行程已經完畢.
2) Roller coaster and Abyss 是plural, 所以應該是give, 不是gives.

1. Al guys, I have help you plan for the day "Hong Kong tour itinerary.
2. (Ocean Park) there's a lot you try not to stimulate rides, such as crazy roller-coaster ride, even after his machine.
3. Finally, I will send you return to the hotel, concluding his visit.
4. I hope I can give you a wonderful, unforgettable tour!