9thNovember,2015
Dear Peter,
How are you? I left Hong Kong in 2008 to study overseas, then I returned to Hong Kong in2015. I will tell you about the changes.
Firstly, In 2008, Hong Kong had many traditional and old buildings in Sham Shui Po. But now, Hong Kong has many high-rise buildings, because some wealthy companies is going to build high-rise flats. They keep on developing the old areas of Hong Kong.
Secondly, In 2008, Hong Kong's air pollution index was low, but now, Hong Kong’s air pollution is setting servious, because of exhaust fume.
Thirdly, In 2008, Hong Kong people needed a lot of plastic shopping bags, but now, each plastic bag costs 50 cents, then they bring their own shopping bag. It is a good change.
Finally, In 2008, Hong Kong's water pollution was quite serious, but now, Hong Kong’s water pollution is more serious.
And In 2008, Hong Kong has enough sea, but now, Hong Kong government make land from the sea, then Hong Kong has many high-rise flats.
I think Hong Kong people must cherishe the earth and treasure the resources. But, Hong Kong also has many senic site, such as Disneyland and Ocean Park, there are great fun. If you have a opportunity to come to Hong Kong, I will leads you to play Hong Kong.
Please write back soon.
Best Wishes,
Chris Wong
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2009-11-13 6:55 am
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2009-11-13 9:15 am
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(我衹改Grammer. 很多句子如果重寫效果會更好)9 November,2015 (不用th)
Dear Peter,
How are you? I left Hong Kong in 2008 to study overseas. I returned to Hong Kong in 2015. Below are the changes I have observed.
Firstly, back in 2008 Hong Kong had many traditional and old buildings in Sham Shui Po. Today Hong Kong has many high-rise buildings because some wealthy companies have been building high-rise buildings. They keep developing the old areas in Hong Kong.
Secondly, in 2008 Hong Kong's air pollution index was low. Today Hong Kong's air pollution is bad.
Thirdly, in 2008 Hong Kong people used a lot of plastic shopping bags. Today each plastic bag costs 50 cents. They start bringing their own shopping bags. This is a good change.
Finally, in 2008 Hong Kong's water contamination was quite serious. Today Hong Kong's water contamination is even worse.
And also in 2008 Hong Kong had more shoreline. Today Hong Kong government has been making land from the sea in order to build more high-rise buildings.
I think Hong Kong people should cherish the earth and treasure the resources. Today Hong Kong has many attractions such as Disneyland and Ocean Park. (scenic site 是風景區, 廸士尼和海洋公園不算是). There are great fun here. If you have an opportunity to come to Hong Kong, I will show you around.
Please write back soon.
Best Wishes,
Chris Wong
2009-11-14 9:19 pm
2009-11-13 11:31 am
(9th) 9 November,2015
Dear Peter,
How are you? I left Hong Kong in 2008 to study overseas, (then I) I then returned to Hong Kong in2015. I will now tell you about the changes I observed.
Firstly, In 2008, Hong Kong had many traditional and old buildings in Sham Shui Po. (But)-delete now, Hong Kong has many (high-rise buildings) skyscrapers built by some wealthy companies as residential buildings (because some wealthy companies is going to build high-rise flats). They keep (on)-delete developing the old areas of Hong Kong.
Secondly, In 2008, Hong Kong's air pollution index was low. Now, Hong Kong's air pollution is (setting servious) getting worse / deteriorating, because of exhaust fumes.
Thirdly, In 2008, Hong Kong people needed a lot of plastic shopping bags. Now, each plastic bag costs 50 cents, (then) so they bring their own shopping bags. (It) This is a good change.
Finally, In 2008, Hong Kong's water pollution was quite serious. Now, Hong Kong's water pollution is even more serious.
In 2008, Hong Kong (has enough sea) had a larger sea-area. Now, the Hong Kong government (make land from the sea) has been conducting land reclamation, (then Hong Kong has many) to build more high-rise flats.
I think Hong Kong people must (cherishe) cherish the earth and treasure the natural resources. (But, Hong Kong also has many senic site, such as Disneyland and Ocean Park, there are great fun.) Hong Kong has many fun attractions such as Disneyland and Ocean Park. If you have (a) an opportunity to come to Hong Kong, I will (leads you to play Hong Kong) show you around / be your guide.
Please write back soon.
Best Wishes,
Chris Wong
Dear Peter,
How are you? I left Hong Kong in 2008 to study overseas, (then I) I then returned to Hong Kong in2015. I will now tell you about the changes I observed.
Firstly, In 2008, Hong Kong had many traditional and old buildings in Sham Shui Po. (But)-delete now, Hong Kong has many (high-rise buildings) skyscrapers built by some wealthy companies as residential buildings (because some wealthy companies is going to build high-rise flats). They keep (on)-delete developing the old areas of Hong Kong.
Secondly, In 2008, Hong Kong's air pollution index was low. Now, Hong Kong's air pollution is (setting servious) getting worse / deteriorating, because of exhaust fumes.
Thirdly, In 2008, Hong Kong people needed a lot of plastic shopping bags. Now, each plastic bag costs 50 cents, (then) so they bring their own shopping bags. (It) This is a good change.
Finally, In 2008, Hong Kong's water pollution was quite serious. Now, Hong Kong's water pollution is even more serious.
In 2008, Hong Kong (has enough sea) had a larger sea-area. Now, the Hong Kong government (make land from the sea) has been conducting land reclamation, (then Hong Kong has many) to build more high-rise flats.
I think Hong Kong people must (cherishe) cherish the earth and treasure the natural resources. (But, Hong Kong also has many senic site, such as Disneyland and Ocean Park, there are great fun.) Hong Kong has many fun attractions such as Disneyland and Ocean Park. If you have (a) an opportunity to come to Hong Kong, I will (leads you to play Hong Kong) show you around / be your guide.
Please write back soon.
Best Wishes,
Chris Wong
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