英文介紹自己..THX

我叫xxx 23yr old
My name is xxx and I'm 23 years old.

中五畢業之後做左六年CLERK.
I've been working as a clerk for 6 years since my Form 5 graduation.

中學畢業之後就參加左紅十字會....做下義工....
參加左五年啦....本時星期六及星期日都會幫手教下小朋友及服務社會...
For the last 5 years, I've been participating in the voluntary services organized by the Red Cross. I'm going to take part in another community service helping to teach some children coming weekend.

我都幾鍾意參加制服團體....一黎可以增加自己的溝通能力...又可以學到平時
返工學習唔到既事物
I'm quite proud to be in uniform, and happy with the opportunities to sharpen my communication skills and learn something beyond the scope of my daily work.

2009-11-25 23:07:02 補充：
可悲才女，你以為這是在傷害我嗎？看看是誰愈說愈瘋？

若滿口污言穢語就是你自尊心的止痛藥的話，我絕對承受得起；且隨便繼續好了!

I am xxx .I am 23 years old .I am like to do .........

A may not be possible to help me to know and the extension English says!?
THANKS!!!

After I call in xxx 23yr old five graduations, makes left six year CLERK.
After the middle school graduates, joins the left Red Cross….Is the voluntary worker….
Participates in the left five years….This time Saturday and Sunday can help under the personally written by the child and the service society…
My several Zhong Yi participates in the uniform association….A Lebanon may increase own communication ability…And may learn usually does over does not study both the thing

我叫xxx 23yr old:After I call in xxx 23yr old
中五畢業之後:five graduations
做左六年CLERK:makes left six year CLERK.
中學畢業之後就參加左紅十字會....做下義工....:After the middle school graduates, joins the left Red Cross….Is the voluntary worker….
參加左五年啦....本時星期六及星期日都會幫手教下小朋友及服務社會...:Participates in the left five years….This time Saturday and Sunday can help under the personally written by the child and the service society…
我都幾鍾意參加制服團體....一黎可以增加自己的溝通能力...又可以學到平時
返工學習唔到既事物:My several Zhong Yi participates in the uniform association….A Lebanon may increase own communication ability…And may learn usually does over does not study both the thing
謝謝... :Thank you