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Purpose

The website main MAINLY describes information such as PS3 function, accessories and use way METHOD OF USAGE.The purpose IS TO help people (to) DELETE understand the use of PS3 and it propaganda ps3 ITS PROPAGANDA.

Coverage

The website coverage IS very wide. Other than featuring the functions of PS3, their also provides THEY ALSO PROVIDE information regarding PS3 peripherals with images and users' guides for net surferS' reference. For example, after you find the ps3 cable, their THEY show cable type and format.
Besides, website have THE WEBSITE HAS AN FAQ SECTION, WHERE it assembleuser ASSEMBLES USERS' frequently asked questions and provideS the answer. if YOU HAVE any questionS, you can send AN e-mail to website founder.


Accuracy

THE Information of PS3 and games featured in this website is gathered through official sources
in order to ensure its correctness. (Other hand)-DELETE webmasters will also review the news; if the correct page will be IS pasted. Therefore, the topic (of their own) have HAS a correct understanding.


Currency

Whereas general information in this Website will be IS updated every 3 to 4 days in average to stay synchronized with software-updates offered by official sources, game information is updated daily. When expertS discover new technologies about game consoleS, Web page will also update news and discussion NEWS AND DISCUSSION ARE ALSO UPDATED ON THE WEBPAGE. (Anther)DELETE it provide ALLOWS net surferS to submit PS3 news. So, website information is updated very quickly.


Objectivity

THE Site founder (will some)DELETE OFFER advice for news and peripherals. There THEY also used more beautiful the words to describe PS3. There may be an exaggeration or bias. So it is not objectivity OBJECTIVE.


Authority
In Authority, THE Site founder is A computer programmer by day, HE IS FAMILIAR WITH TECHNOLOGY. So there are FEW opportunities for data error. And most of the information IS from the official website.

2009-11-11 03:12:19 補充：
Note of advice: be clear on how to use "they" 他們 and "their" 他們的.

有D 句子我無copy到因為唔夠位, 而唔係grammatically incorrect.

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