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2009-11-06 6:59 am
IH Test
Tomorrow is IH Test. So I writing about Tide things. The tide trend the times at the pointed end. If many people like oneself is very cool, to have an idea is a Tide. So they are to spend many money in to the Tide. But young people do not blind to follow the Tide.
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2009-11-06 5:18 pm
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IH Test
Original Version:
Tomorrow is IH Test. So I writing about Tide things. The tide trend the times at the pointed end. If many people like oneself is very cool, to have an idea is a Tide. So they are to spend many money in to the Tide. But young people do not blind to follow the Tide.

Edited Version:
There is an IH Test tomorrow, so I am writing about cutting-edge fashion, which sets the trend for the hottest fashion of the time. For all those people who are attracted to cool things, a new idea that is cool becomes the cutting-edge fashion. and they are willing to spend a lot of money on it. However, young people do not follow the trend blindly.

2009-11-07 06:34:13 補充:
Revised (part 1):
There is an IH Test tomorrow, so I am writing about cutting-edge trend, which is for the coolest things of the time.

2009-11-07 06:34:48 補充:
Revised (part 2):
For all those people who are attracted to cool things, a new cool idea becomes the cutting-edge trend, and they are willing to spend a lot of money on it. However, young people do not follow the trend blindly.

2009-11-09 12:16:44 補充:
請注意 tide 雖然解 [潮流],但是指 [潮水],而不是指 [時興] 的 [潮流]。Trend 解 [時興] 的 [潮流],適用於任何流行事物,而 vogue 則適用於流行 fashion 同 clothing。Cutting-edge 解 [頂尖]。
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