200字既英文自我介紹﹠我最喜愛的節日

I like the holiday isIs the Christmas day, is celebrates the day which
Jesus Christ is born。
The Christmas day is one is welcome the holiday, Christmas day, the glass curtain wall's building, packed the decorative lighting, decorative lighting's type have been very many, has Jesus Christ, the angel, Santa Claus, the Bethlehem star, the Christmas tree, the Christmas flower, all sorts of related Christmas's theme, nighttime the street is also illuminated by these bright with many colors decorative lighting especially brightly, attractive.
If everybody feels Christmas day's atmosphere to be possible to arrive at Tsim Sha Tsui Promenade, the Vidor advantage park, the intermediate belt, Wanzai, Causeway Bay and Jin Zhong and so on. Can enable everybody surely to have an impression profound Christmas day.

大家好,我叫XXX,英文名是XXXXX,住在XXXXX
電郵是xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx,
我的性格XXXXX
喜歡天藍色,因為給我一種很舒服的感覺
喜歡的生果是橙,
喜歡的飲品是牛奶,
喜歡的科目是美術及視覺藝術科.
在學校,我最喜歡的地方就是圖書館,因為裡面永遠都很寧靜
我的志願就是成為一位老師.
狗是我最喜歡的動物,我覺得牠們很可愛
喜歡的圖書有Miss別煩我
我特別喜歡秋季,因為秋天不像得夏天那麼熱,又不會像冬天那麼冷
喜歡聽一些較輕快的音樂,聽了令人很舒服,心情舒暢

Everybody is good, I call XXX, English name is, lives in email is xxxx, my disposition likes the sky blue, because one kind of very comfortable feeling likes for me the crude fruit is an orange, likes the drinks are a milk, likes the subject is the fine arts and the visual arts branch.
In the school, the place which I most like is the library, because inside forever is very tranquil I the wish becomes a teacher.
The dog is the animal which I most like, I thought they like very lovably the books have Miss not to be tired of my me to like the autumn specially, because the autumn that does not look like the summer to be hot, will not look like so is in the winter cold likes listening to some lively music, listened to make the human to be very comfortable, has ease of mind

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