英文gramma

第一句:
The reson to have enough sleep is you feeling tired.

呢題係錯。

第一:
you後個個係ARE 5係 IS 。

第二

feeling後係有個 ARE 架

第二句:

一個錯

sleeping後要有are

spelling:

reson錯 係reason

2009-11-05 21:42:57 補充：
第一題:

加多一個because 係 you 後。5要個is

you should have a good time table to control your time.
用control對嗎?
可以用control...

至於1.The reson to have enough sleep is you feeling tired.
2.The reson to have enough sleeping is you are tired.

1.reason寸錯，漏咗個A...
2.Grammer完全唔岩...無人會明你講咩.

改..

The reason you feel tried because you don't have enough sleep(/rest).

2009-10-31 13:26:55 補充：
you should have a good time table to control your time.
用control對嗎?

應該唔係好岩...贊成樓上...

It is better to use "manage" instead of "control".

Both statements are grammatically incorrect. It should be rewritten as follows:
The reason to have enough sleep is you feel tired. OR
The reason to have enough sleep is you are tired.

Pls also note that this statement is not logical.
It may be rewritten as follows:
Since you didn't get enough sleep (last night), you feel/are tired (now).

half correct.
However,2.The reson to have enough sleeping is you are tired.
it is wrong.it should be
you are tired because you do not have enough rest