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2009-10-30 7:39 am
we are going to park at 11 o'clock on sunday morning,i hope you go there with us ,and then have lunch with together,if you have time,please contact me on telephone,unless you can take a message for me.
我們星期日早上十一點會去公園,我希望你能與我們一齊去,之後一起吃飯.如果你有時間,你可以打電話給我,否則發短訊給我吧.

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2009-10-30 11:03 am
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We are going to the park at eleven o’clock on Sunday morning. I hope you can come with us and have lunch together if you are available. Please contact me by phone, or you can send a SMS to me.
2009-10-30 11:24 am
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2009-10-30 7:47 am
We are going to the park at 11 o'clock on Sunday morning, I hope you come with us and the we have lunch together. Please call me or text me if you have a moment to spare.


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