英文問題,請各位幫忙下

2009-10-29 12:54 am
這是祝福朋友生日,文法有錯嗎?要柵改嗎?
I hasten to congratulate you on the coming of your birthday. I want to be one of the first who say "happy birthday to you" may everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

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2009-11-02 1:30 am
✔ 最佳答案
以下是更改完的文字︰


I hasten to Congratulating you on the coming of your birthday! I want to be one of the first one who says “happy birthday” to you. May Hope that everything it take to make will be success and have a very happy and successful year!
參考: Yogi


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