i had worked in a clothes shop when i was a student on holiday,i remember that all new staff must study how to packing.but i think that it was easy to do.
當我是學生時,我曾經於衣服店工作,我記得所有新員工都必需學習如何包裝衣服,但我覺得這是好容易學的.
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2009-10-27 4:43 am
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2009-10-27 7:01 am
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I worked (only one event in the past) in a clothes shop when I was a student. I remember that all new staff(s) must study how to (pack) (use to-infinitive), but I think (that) (this word is optional) it was easy to do.
2009-10-27 5:51 am
I have worked in a clothes shop during holidays when i was a student.
I still remember that all the new staff must have to learn how to package the clothes.
However, i think that is a easy job.
in my opinion,
"during holidays" seems better than "on holiday"
"packing" is a noun, it cannot use behind " to "
"must have to learn" seems better than "must study"
actually, " but " cannot be used in the beginning of the sentence in formal english!
2009-10-26 21:55:47 補充：
CORRECTION!!!
" all the new staff " should add " s "
all the new staffs
I still remember that all the new staff must have to learn how to package the clothes.
However, i think that is a easy job.
in my opinion,
"during holidays" seems better than "on holiday"
"packing" is a noun, it cannot use behind " to "
"must have to learn" seems better than "must study"
actually, " but " cannot be used in the beginning of the sentence in formal english!
2009-10-26 21:55:47 補充：
CORRECTION!!!
" all the new staff " should add " s "
all the new staffs
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