英文作文(好急!!!!!!)

2009-10-21 6:03 pm
老師比左一句我地:it was a normal day until.....
比d idea我/作個短文比我得吾得(其實要好長- -只不過吾知點作)
thx(好急-口-)

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2009-10-22 1:48 am
✔ 最佳答案
Examples and Ideas:

Opening (1) It was a normal day until I was walking home and on the side of the road I found a crazy child .
Opening (2) It was a normal day until I met Harry Potter and his friends on my way home.
Opening (3) It was a normal day until my eleven year old sister told my mum that she'd seen me smoking at school, but of course my mum didn't believe her-because I don't smoke.
Opening (4) It was a normal day until the US president came.
Opening (5) It was a normal day until everybody reckons that I was mad .
Opening (6) It was a normal day until he wept. In his life he had taken certain things for granted, never challenging his belief in ultimate success, and bothering little about means and roads. But here he was confronted with a thing of moment. It had suddenly appeared to him that perhaps in a battle he might run. He was forced to admit that as far as war was concerned he knew nothing of himself .
Opening (7) It was a normal day until I found some treasures in my breast-pocket.

Ending (1): It was a normal day, and then her boss snapped at her, or did she? It was a normal day, then the guy cut her off in the line, or did he? It was a normal day, then she missed her train, or did she? It was a normal day until it wasn't.

Ending (2):
It is impossible to tell how first the idea entered my brain; but once conceived, it haunted me day and night.

Moral Examples:

There are some cliff-hangers, heartbreak and barriers in our life. We ought to be more optimistic. We should not blame ourselves of _________.

2009-10-21 17:51:03 補充:
Sorry, D字細隻左D
everybody reckons 果度個reckon係PAST TENSE so it should be reckoned你可以USE第2D字黎replace it, for instance, assume, think, suppose, believe...etc
參考: Myself, me
2009-10-21 9:10 pm
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開頭:

It was a normal day until several students started to throw up shortly after they had lunch at the school cafeteria.


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