有人幫我反譯英文嗎??急,,,

corrections from nigalhazedread's version (beware punctuation marks and active/passive voice and tense):


There is a lovely girl who is named Teresa, She was born in a wealthy family.

Once on her birthday, she was dressed up beautifully and playing piano at home when there came her father whose arms were holding a Teddy Bear.

Her father stood in front of Teresa and said, happy birthday, my dear. Then he got to run out. Teresa stopped him and asked if he was coming to see her playing piano. The father smirked and said "Daddy gotta work, I promise that I will see you playing piano next time."

For the sake of buying a cake for Teresa, the father was crashed by a car when he was about to run out on the road. He died so that this father and daughter were separated forever.

Thereafter, Teresa moved to another city with her mother. Her hands still hold the little Teddy Bear tightly. Since her father died, Teresa has not opened her mouth to speak anything with others. The only thing she does is to find a piano to play the song which she learned from her father.


-- try to be concise when you're reporting a tragedy; wordy makes audience feel boresome while colorful words makes people feel the writer is non-sensational. Conversation should not be used extensively in reports unless the place where you want to emphasize something.

There is a little girl who named Teresa, Who born in a wealthy family.

One day, Which is her birthday. She was playing piano at home when her father step in. And she saw her father was holding a Teddy Bear in his arms.

Her father took a few steps to stand in front of her and said: ‘Happy birthday, My dear.’ Then his father wanted to run out. But Teresa intercepted him and said: ‘Aren’t you going to see me to play the piano?’ His father smirked and said: ‘Daddy got to work, I promise I will see you play piano next time.’

For the sake of buying birthday cake for Teresa. He was hit by a car when he’s about to run out on the road. Teresa’s father died. And she’ll be separated with her father for the rest of her life.

Afterwards, Teresa followed her mother to go to another place to live. Teresa still holds the little Teddy Bear tightly in her arms. Since her father died, Teresa dose not open her mouth to talk anymore. The only thing she knows to do, Is to find somewhere with piano, And play the song that she learned from her father.

ps 佢每次打扮得好令.. 冇譯.. 覺得冇乜必要

Some little girl, she calls: teresa, her room business good rich, she each time all dresses up well makes,
her bullet hit qin, that day is her birthday, returns proficiently, she saw her daddy is hugging a young Xiong baby.
Afterwards the daddy walks goes forward to say that,The daughter, the birthday is joyful, takes the young Xiong baby to give her the daughter.
Afterwards the daddy has run,
Teresa said: The daddy you are not come to see I play a stringed musical instrument.
The daddy smiled said the daddy wants to work, next time the daddy certainly looked you play a stringed musical instrument,
in order to help teresa to buy the cake, the daddy runs when is just about to flushes the street, by Che Zhuang has been died, from this time on, the girl and the daddy separate two places,
teresa on with arrive other city life along with mother, in the teresa hand still hug the daddy to deliver her the young Xiong baby, has died after the daddy t, eresa with other people has not spoken again,
she only can do the matter, only is looks for one to have the piano place. The ball daddy before death teaches the tune which he shoots