呢句英文句子有無錯？

Do you remember we are going to have a meeting in the function room tonight? Is it O.K to meet you at the lobby at 6pm?
用we are going to have 意思是在短時間內會做某些事情。
in the function room 意思是在 function room 裡面。但 at the lobby 是正確的應用。

Please be reminded that we are having a meeting at the function room tonight. Kindly meet up at the lobby before 6pm.

咁樣講會好 D 及客氣 D.
Please be reminded that our meeting in the function room will be at 6pm tonight. Kindly meet me at the lobby by that time.