做報告..求英文翻譯一小段~急

2009-10-05 9:43 am
求英文翻譯;

聖地牙哥古堡酒店的劣勢是出於自身的問題,酒店有著由久的歷史,是一座較舊式的建築物,較少修葺,另外規模和員工較小是十分嚴重的問題,其二,因為存在著場合、資金和人才短缺等問題,沒有給員工提供一些定期的培訓。

聖地牙哥古堡酒店的劣勢是出於自身的問題,酒店有著由久的歷史,是一座較舊式的建築物,較少修葺,另外規模和員工較小是十分嚴重的問題,其二,因為存在著場合、資金和人才短缺等問題,沒有給員工提供一些定期的培訓。
(機會)
雖然酒店存在很多的問題,但是它本身有著令人羨慕的優勢,因為它在2005年被列入《世界文化遺產》的澳門歷史城區,把握這個機會,能吸引更多旅客前來參觀,另外,酒店內有聖雅各伯聖堂, 可供客人多方面的用途, 如:舉行婚禮或為信徒提供場作, 能為酒店帶來其他方面的盈利。
(威脅)
近年來,因為政府不斷把地批給發展商,令酒店月建月多,月建月富麗堂皇,
面對著五光十色的建築物和五花八門娛樂場所,人們難免會被吸引,另外聖地牙哥古堡酒店沒有娛樂場所,加上古堡日益殘舊和隨時面臨剝落崩塌的危機,更加提不人們的興趣。

回答 (2)

2009-10-06 1:03 am
✔ 最佳答案
首先想回應下這篇中文是否你自己寫的?連中文都有些錯字和句法不通和寫作編輯上的技巧都有問題。姑且幫埋你的中文(只能改正個別字詞 - 全段不理想方面只能提出,未能修正,請自行修理:


.第一段(是否重複了兩次)
.有「其二」,不見「其一」
.員工較小(少)
.場合 - 是一項活動或宴會的時空,我諗你是想說「場地」或是「地方」或是「位置」上的問題。
.令酒店月(越)建月(越)多,月(越)建月(越)富麗堂皇
.(機會)和(威脅)是否公式的分段?如想增加兩段的緊湊度,可在機會中帶出酒店管理或政府在管理上的配套要點;在威脅中亦提供改善的意見。


(澳門)聖地牙哥古堡酒店的名字應該用「葡文」Pousada de Sao Tiago原裝名稱翻譯。


見另一位提供的機器翻譯根本沒有一句是可以給你交功課,唔想扣到零分最好不要用,自己學好中英語文吧啦。


我把你想說的(不是你寫的中文版)用英文寫一篇,如你覺得好便試下翻譯返回中文:


Pousada de Sao Tiago in Macau is a historical vintage building, but it has few regular maintenance and becomes running down. It is relative small in size and employs only a few operation staff due to its locality, salary offer and inability to provide continuous training for its employees


(Opportunities)
The hotel has inherited one advantage being listed as World Heritage in "The Historic Centre of Macao" in 2005. With this title in hand, it can attract tourists who may be interested to visit and stay in a heritage site. In addition, the Chapel of St. James has been restored in 1978 that can be used for wedding receptions and religious functions. These can bring in addition revenue for the hotel.


(Threats)
In recent years, Government's land allocation to build more and more extravagant hotels, with glamorous building structure and various gaming and entertainment faculties, may draw tourists to these new establishments. Pousada de Sao Tiago must step up its maintenance and service level and consider putting in addition attractive features in order to sustain continuous occupancy.


請自己參考酒店網頁和澳門的資訊已有足夠的英文文章供你參考寫作,最低限度名詞上不會用錯。


http://www.saotiago.com.mo/main_e.html
http://www.macauheritage.net/wh/indexE.asp
2009-10-05 10:19 pm
San Diego old castle hotel inferiority is stems from own question, the hotel has by the long history, is a old-style building, few repairs, moreover the scale and the staff are small are the very serious issues, its two, because has the situation, the fund and the talented person short and so on questions, has not provided some regular training to the staff.

(Opportunity)
Although hotel existence many questions, but it has the enviable
superiority, because it is included in 2005 "World culture
Inheritance" Macao history city, grasps this opportunity, can attract
more passengers to come to visit, moreover, in the hotel has Saint
Jacob uncle Kaaba, may supply visitor various use, for example:
The hold wedding ceremony or provides the field for the follower to
do, can bring other aspects for the hotel the profit.

(Threat)
Recent years, because the government gives unceasingly the place
batch the developer, is constructed the month the hotel month,
the month constructs the month to be splendid, is facing the bright
with many colors building and all kinds of recreation area, the people will be attracted unavoidably, moreover San Diego old castle hotel
will not have the recreation area, in addition the old castle day by day dilapidated and will momentarily face the flaking avalanche's crisis,
even more will not raise people's interest.


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