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Donald

2009-09-15 1:08 am

Nowadays, Communication skills is most important in this society. i confess i am not the great one of this skills.
so that i join a lot of activities to increase this skill.
i am a member of macau red cross, they equip me with the ability to provide services. so that they can let me to know
a lot of friends who i don't know before. after i join this group, i found that i am a good member.
i can help the member or leader to finish the jop perfectly. my interest is advertisement.
i have the experience of this. in each summer, i helped one website to make a advertise, althougt the result is not good
, but i think that i can do it well. i like reading because reading can help me to know more about the world.
and the book can lead me to find the right way in the life.
beside that, i am taking some lesson of account.
althought, i don't want to do any about accountant, but i think learn one more thing is not bad.
my first voluntariness is this university,
because i think this university have something and other school cannot have it.
i hope that i can as a member of this university.

thank you for your correct

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Peter

2009-09-15 1:34 am

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Nowadays, communication skill is most important in this society. I admit that I am not great on this so I join a lot of activities to increase this skill. I am a member of the Macau Red Cross. It equips me with the ability to provide services and let me know a lot of friends whom I didn't know before. After joining this group, I find that I am a good member. I can help members and leaders to finish the jop perfectly. My interest is advertisement on which I have experience. In each summer, I help one website to make a advertisement. Although the result is not good, I think that I can do it well. I like reading because it can help me to know more about the world and the book can lead me to the right way in the life. Besides, I am taking some lessons on accounting. Although I don't want to be an accountant, I think learning one more thing is not bad. My first choice is this university because I think this university has something that other schools don't.
I hope I can enroll into this university.

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Nowadays, communication skill is very important in this society.

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