急...英文推薦信 請高手 謝謝。20分!

嘩！你個上師都幾縮骨，我試吓幫你啦，但你自己要加多減少的：
XXX Optical Ltd
11 September 2009

To Whom It May Concern

I am pleased to provide this reference letter to Mr. Chan Tai Man who was employed by XXX Optical Ltd from 1 January 2007 until xxx xxxx.
Mr Chan was initially recruited as a Junior Sales clerk. In this period Mr Chan showed us his excellent working performance and get along with other staff members soon. In March 2008, Mr Chan was promoted to senior sales clerk. During these periods his responsibilities included :
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During his employment with XXX Optical Ltd Mr Chan performed his job well and proved to be a responsible, honest and reliable member of staff.
Mr Chan resigned of his own volition on the above date. We wish him well in any future endeavours and recommended him highly to any future employer.

Yours faithfully

XXXXXX

We wish him well in HIS future endeavours and recommend ( no "ed") him highly to any future employer.

2009-09-15 00:38:08 補充：
In this period Mr Chan showed <--- simple past tense us his excellent working performance and get<---- simple present tense along with other staff members soon.

Simple past tense + simple present tense!! What a nice combo!

2009-09-15 00:48:14 補充：
During his employment with XXX Optical Ltd Mr Chan performed his job well and proved to be a responsible, honest and reliable member of staff.

During xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, <--( We should use a comma here)

Mr. Chan performed his duties well and proved to be a responsible,
honest and reliable employee.

2009-09-15 00:48:25 補充：
" employee" = clear and simple

member of staff = Clumsy!!


To do his job well To perform his duties well

To perform his job = Awkward !

2009-09-15 00:51:58 補充：
I am pleased to provide this reference letter to Mr. Chan Tai Man who was employed by XXX Optical Ltd from 1 January 2007 until xxx xxxx.


to provide someone WITH something


Mr passer-by, it is your turn to correct your own sentence!


Poof!!!

2009-09-15 01:01:24 補充：
By the way, the reason why I have decided to point out your mistakes is that you have been acting like you are the king of English.

Don't you know that English belongs to everyone?

2009-09-15 01:01:52 補充：
Your arrogance and low English standard have driven me nuts for some reasons. Anyway I am going to leave this forum for good.

I do hope that one day sooner or later you will see that being on an ego trip is not healthy at all.

Wake up and smell the coffee while it is hot!