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2009-09-06 7:49 am
my hobby is watching movie expect romantic film,i almost watched movie everyday when i was a student of university ,because school life was boring,i couldn't do anything,as a result,watching movie became my hobby.

我的興趣是看電影,除了是愛情片,我讀大學時幾乎每日看電影,因為學校生活好悶,我不能做任何事,而致看電影成為了我的興趣.

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2009-09-06 10:19 am
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我的興趣是看電影,除了是愛情片,我讀大學時幾乎每日看電影,因為學校生活好悶,我不能做任何事,而致看電影成為了我的興趣.
Watching movies apart from romantic ones is something I like the most. I remember having spent lots of my spare time watching
all kinds of films almost every day when studying at university.
You could never picture how humdrum my days were when I had nothing to do in my dorm.
University life absolutely bored me to death! Movies are what pop into my head when I am at leisure because of that.
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愛情片= romance movies /romantic movies
university life vs school life
Every day - two words <-----------adverb of frequency
Everyday --- one word <-- It is an adjective.
watching movies(<----plural here)
except xxxx films <(plural here as well)
The words "movie" and "film" are both countable nouns in the sentences.
when i was a student of university <--- kinda clumsy
when studying at university <----- much better
when studying(v-ing)
apart from = except
We usually say " to SEE a movie in the cinema"
and " to watch TV/VCDs/DVDs at home".


2009-09-06 22:49:05 補充:
****Watching movies apart from romantic ones is the thing I like the most.

2009-09-06 22:49:43 補充:
****Watching movies apart from romantic ones is the thing I like the most.
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2009-09-06 5:56 pm
My interest watches the movie, except is the movie, I attend when the university watches the movie nearly every day, because the school lives well stuffy, I cannot do any matter, but sends looked that the movie has become my interest
2009-09-06 5:17 pm
Other than romantic ones, watching movies is something I fond of and I did it almost everyday during my college life. It is because it was boring then and watching movies became my hobby.


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