help~英文小學入學申請信

你可以講吓啲校風同教學模式 :
the studying environment is good for students
the teaching method of teachers are in good reputation
你亦可講吓學生們(現在就讀學生)給你的感覺 :
good learning attitude of the students
students are in good manner and accomplishment
最好有親身感受的例子, 如你的鄰居(或朋友)的兒子在貴校讀書, 給你很好的印象 :
I have a neighbour, whose son is studying in your school. The boy gave me a very good impression. He works hard and is nice to everybody. So this is one of my point that I think my son should have such excellent education as becoming your school's student.

先講明我不覺得你需要人回答你。你問的其實不是英文問題，而是想他人代你想原因，我覺得入學申請的原因只有你自己才最清楚，是網上的人不能幫到你的。