急!!簡單英文翻譯

My name is XXX. I am 15 years old. I am not tall, but many people praise my appearance. In my spare time, I hang around to take the photos of buses because I am a bus spotter. Also, I usually spend some time on voluntary work. Among all subjects in school, I love English most, especially English oral. About there are 3 members in my family. My parents and I enjoy our wonderful family life, and we have close relationship with each other. I am an active and patient person. And I am humorous, I like give grate happiness to my surrounding people. I hope that I can contribute to the society. Being a teacher or the boss of the public bus company is my ambition. In this year, I want to my oral skill, because I want to have a good communicate with foreign fluently.

2009-09-17 21:12:17 補充：
I want to imporve my oral skill,

My name is xxx. People used to call me x. I am fifteen and I am rather short/tiny. Many people say that I am lovely/cute/pretty, but I think I am just OK.

In my spare time, I like wandering around, shooting pictures of buses, for I am a super fan of buses. Besides, I enjoy being a volunteer, too.

Among all subjects in school, I love English best, especially oral English.

There are three members in my family, my parents and I. We love one another and have very close relationship.

I think I am an active and patient person with a sense of humour.
In the future, I hope I can contribute myself to the society, such as being a teacher or the owner of a bus company.

This year, I will aim at improving my oral skills in English. So that I won't be speechless when coming across with foreigners.

My name is xxx, my family name is x, i am 15 years old, my stature, many people say i'm XX, but i think i look just general,, i will spare time to shoot bus photos, because i am a bus fan, i will also be pumping some time to do volunteer work, in schools so many subjects i prefer English especially English, session, my family have a total of three members, they are father and mother and me, our family was very cordial, relationship is also very good, my character comparison of active and secluded default and patience, i'd be a community of people, such as gifts is a teacher or public bus company, in this year's session by the Church, i would like to add my English ability to improve, in dialogue to help foreign tourists do mouth when reemerging illnesses.

In my opinion, the second one is the best; the third one is good also, especially the last sentence. Just replace the end of the second one with that of the third one: "This year I will be doing my best to improve my oral English so that I won't find myself speechless when helping foreign visitors."

我的名子是xxx,我的FAMILY NAME IS X,我今年15歲,我身材矮小,很多人都說我很XX,但是我認為我的樣子只是一般,,我會在空閒的時間到處去拍巴士照片,因為我是一個巴士迷,我還會抽一些時間去做義工,在學校這麼多的科目中我比較喜歡英文特別是英文,會話,我的家庭一共有三位成員,他們便是爸爸媽媽和我,我們這一家很融洽,關係也很好,我的性格比較活躍和幽黙而且很有耐性,我很想做一個對社會有供獻的人,例如是一位教師或者是公共巴士公司的老板,在這一年的會話堂,我想將我的英文對話能力提高,在幫助外籍遊客的時候都不用口疾疾.

My full name is XXXXXXX.People who know me call me XXXX.
This year I am 15. I am a short girl. My friends always say that
I am pretty, but I just think I look simple.
I love travelling around and shooting pictures of buses because
I am a bus fan.
In my spare time, I do voluntary work at school.
Speaking of my studies, I like English and oral English more than any other subjects.
About my family, I live with my family-just three of us.
We all get along so well.
Since I am quite active, humourous and patient, I would really
like to contribute myself to society. I guess being a teacher
or a boss of a (public) bus company would be fascinating.
This year I will be doing my best to improve my oral English so that
I won't find myself speechless when helping foreign visitors.

My name is XX, and my family name is XX. I am fifteen years old. I am very short. Many people said I am very XX, but I think my appearance is just ordinary. I take a lot of bus pictures during my spare time as I am a fan of buses. I do take some time to do voluntary work. My favorite subject in school is oral English amongst all subjects. My family has three family members who are my parents. My family is in perfect harmony and the relationship is very good. My personality is I have a sense of humor and have a lot of patience. I want to be a contributor to the society, for example, to be a teacher or a management staff of the public transportation company. I want to enhance my spoken English skills in this year of oral English lessons. In that way, I won’t get struck when I assist the foreign visitors.

My Family name is X. You can call me XXX. I am 15 years old. I am not tall. Many people praise my appearance, but I think they are only polite to say that. During my leisure time, I hang around to take the photos of buses because I am a super fan of bus. Also, I usually spend some time on voluntary work. Among all subjects in school, I love English most, especially English oral.

There are 3 members in my family. My parents and I enjoy our wonderful family life, and we have close relationship with each other.

Actually, I am an active and patient person. And I have a sense of humour which make people in my surrounding delighted. I hope that I can contribute to our society. Being a teacher or the boss of the bus company is my ambition. In this one-year oral course, I hope to improve my oral skill, and communicate with foreign tourists fluently.