本人是一名自修生 , 想報最後一年HKCEE , 請大家幫我

Recently , news show that etectrial and mechanical failed to enforce satefy regulations and allow contractors to fail to live up their procedures responsibilities .

etectrial and mechanical 少jor noun？electrical + mechanical 知什麽？是哪個部門？
allowed contractors to fail to live up to their procedural responsibilities.

procedures = noun
responsibilities = noun

a life suddenly broke cables in Tai Po in April . = ?

Why didn't the department learn from the series of problems.
change their working attitudes
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the government should provide more power to ombudsman for monitering other departmant for maintaining good standards and good practices .
ombudsman -> ombudsmen
太多for

the government should provide more power to ombudsmen to monitor other departments, maintaining good standards and practices.

Please inform me if I am incorrect.

Good luck in preparing for the HKCEE~

2009-08-28 23:09:32 補充：
electrical/mechanical 要拿來形容o野
指部門：Electrical and Mechanical Services Department 機電工程處

Recently, THE news show that the Electrical and Mechanical Services Department failed...
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避免太多in（in Tai Po, in April)
You may know(recall,回想） that the cables of a lift was broken a few months ago in Tai Po.

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[newspapers always report that these government departments are non-professional and ineffective]

The mistake is :"The newspaper"...it should be changed to the editiors