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2009-08-27 7:59 am
my favorite sport is basketball.i played basketball everyday when i was student,but i have not been playing after i graduated in university.i must go to work and study course at night expect sunday.

我最喜歡的運動是籃球,我是學生時日日都打藍球,但我畢業後再沒有打籃球了,因為現在除了星期日外,日日都要返工及晚上返學

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2009-08-27 9:08 am
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我最喜歡的運動是籃球,我是學生時日日都打藍球,但我畢業後再沒有打籃球了,因為現在除了星期日外,日日都要返工及晚上返學
My most favorite sport is basketball.
When I was a student, I played that every day.
I stopped playing that after I graduated from university. It is because
I need to work every day and go to school every evening except Sundays.
1) Graduated from university
2) every day <==== two words
everyday = adjective
3) except Sundays <---- a big "S"
4) They call those schools " evening schools" or "night schools".
5) every night ( the later part of the night) =/= every evening ( the early part of the night)
Choose the one that suits best
2009-08-28 4:14 am
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2009-08-27 8:32 am
My favourite/favorite sport is basketball.When I was a student,I play basketball eveyday, but I didn't play basketball anymore, after I graduated in the university. I have to work and study courses at night except Sunday.
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