開頭應該點寫??
更新1:
補充一下就是假如我是一個學生要，去完Honeg Kong Wetland Park，寫封信給John Wu。
更新2:
對唔住咁多位,我對條題目會錯意。佢系一個作文比賽黎架，點解我地需要濕地公園，依條系題目。麻煩咁多位幫我諗系個開頭，唔該晒!
英文作文開頭一問(15點)急!
回答 (2)
2009-08-26 8:41 pm
✔ 最佳答案
嗯，那要看你是什麽時候去的。你可以說：Yesterday/Last weekend/Last Month,I went to Hong Kong Wetland Park with...(和誰去)
這是比較日記形式的，你也可以寫：
I have a travel in Hong Kong.That time I went to Hong Kong Wetland Park in...(日期) with...(人物)
這是比較記敍形式的
2009-08-26 12:42:25 補充：
可以不太好，不過你都可以斟酌一下，或者自己在想象另外一個比較好的吧。
2009-08-26 20:07:16 補充：
爲什麽需要溼地公園？
首先，我建議你先去溼地公園的網站看看，了解溼地公園的重要性，紅樹林、在那裏棲息的鳥、還有環境的問題，這些都是可寫的題材，當然還是要提到環境的污染問題，溼地公園的存在就是環境的一個平衡，遷移鳥類的一個家。
開頭你可以寫：
Dear John,
Yesterday/Last weekend/Last Month,I went to Hong Kong Wetland Park with...(someone)
Hong Kong Wetland Park is one of the famous wetland park in Hong Kong.(然後就可以開始介紹香港溼地公園)
2009-08-26 10:05 pm
Dear John (Wu),
Hi! It has been a long time since i've ever written to you! This time, i have some splendid experience i'd like to share with you.
(Yesterday/Last week/Last month), i went to Hong Kong Wetland Park.......
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write the rest yourselves
hope you like this! :)
Hi! It has been a long time since i've ever written to you! This time, i have some splendid experience i'd like to share with you.
(Yesterday/Last week/Last month), i went to Hong Kong Wetland Park.......
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write the rest yourselves
hope you like this! :)
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