英文作文開頭一問(15點)急!

2009-08-26 8:37 pm
我要作一篇遠足既文章 去Hong Kong Wetland Park
開頭應該點寫??
更新1:

補充一下就是假如我是一個學生要,去完Honeg Kong Wetland Park,寫封信給John Wu。

更新2:

對唔住咁多位,我對條題目會錯意。佢系一個作文比賽黎架,點解我地需要濕地公園,依條系題目。麻煩咁多位幫我諗系個開頭,唔該晒!

回答 (2)

2009-08-26 8:41 pm
✔ 最佳答案
嗯,那要看你是什麽時候去的。你可以說:
Yesterday/Last weekend/Last Month,I went to Hong Kong Wetland Park with...(和誰去)
這是比較日記形式的,你也可以寫:
I have a travel in Hong Kong.That time I went to Hong Kong Wetland Park in...(日期) with...(人物)
這是比較記敍形式的

2009-08-26 12:42:25 補充:
可以不太好,不過你都可以斟酌一下,或者自己在想象另外一個比較好的吧。

2009-08-26 20:07:16 補充:
爲什麽需要溼地公園?

首先,我建議你先去溼地公園的網站看看,了解溼地公園的重要性,紅樹林、在那裏棲息的鳥、還有環境的問題,這些都是可寫的題材,當然還是要提到環境的污染問題,溼地公園的存在就是環境的一個平衡,遷移鳥類的一個家。
開頭你可以寫:
Dear John,
Yesterday/Last weekend/Last Month,I went to Hong Kong Wetland Park with...(someone)
Hong Kong Wetland Park is one of the famous wetland park in Hong Kong.(然後就可以開始介紹香港溼地公園)
2009-08-26 10:05 pm
Dear John (Wu),

Hi! It has been a long time since i've ever written to you! This time, i have some splendid experience i'd like to share with you.

(Yesterday/Last week/Last month), i went to Hong Kong Wetland Park.......

*****************************************
write the rest yourselves
hope you like this! :)


收錄日期: 2021-04-23 23:29:32
原文連結 [永久失效]:
https://hk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090826000051KK00810

檢視 Wayback Machine 備份