英文grammer對稱手法一問

我想問關於grammer入面對稱手法既應用,例如這句:
The longer time that we wait for,my friend will grumble more
請問這句子有寫錯嗎?如果錯了應該如何寫?

The longer we wait, the more my friend will grumble.

( A clear and natural version for you.)

It means: " My friend will grumble more if we wait any longer."

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1)The more
interested(adjective) children become, the more they read.

Meaning:

When children become more interested in reading, they will read more.


2) The more I read, the more I had to read. ( Past tense)

Meaning:

I felt like reading more when I read more.

3) The more I study, the better I will become.

Meaning:


I will become better if I study more.

應該如何寫?
The longer time that we wait for, the more my friend will grumble.
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