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1.may i speak to miss lee,please?

-May I speak to Miss. Lee, please?

-May I talk to Miss. Lee, please?

2.can i leave a message for her?

May I leave her a message?

3.i am her colleage,i want to ask her some question about company.

- I am her colleague. I would like to ask her some questions about HER? company


Whose company is it ? Is it her company?


4.if her come back,please give her this message quickly.

When she is back, please tell her about it as soon as possible.

Can I speak to Miss Lee please?
I am one of her colleage wanting to ask her something about the company.
Is it possible I leave a message for her in the time being?
And could you kindly refer the message to her as soon as she come back. Thank you.

1. Correct
2. Can I leave her a message?
3. I am her colleague. I'd like to ask her about the company.
4. Please give her this message as soon as she comes back.