20點 - 請高手幫譯英文 (不要網翻，謝謝)

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1. 監控及照明電路防雨能力薄弱，電路易短路，影響夜間警戒照明和監控正常使用
The monitoring and lighting systems that are prone to short-circuit due poor rain proof fail to function properly.


2. 電工對線路照明燈進行檢修整改

Electricians to inspect and repair the electric circuit of the illuminating lamps

3. 讓監控供應商重新專線佈置監控線路

Arrange the supplier of monitoring service to reinstall the monitoring circuits

4. 酷暑盛夏，天氣炎熱，影響工作效率，且易中暑

The intense summer heat affects efficicency and may cause heat strokes.

5. 提醒員工鍛煉身體，組織體育活動，加強營養，注意多休息，少外出玩耍

Remind employees to keep good heath by joining sports events, eating nutriouts food, taking proper rest, and avoid staying outdoor unless necessary.

6. 加強門禁管理，凡帶包裹出廠者，一律嚴查

Close inspection will be conducted on anyone leaving the workshop with packages as a measure to tighten up secuirty measures.

7. 直線上級與屬下員工多溝通，引導正確的情感觀

Supervisors should maintain good communication with employees under their direct supervision to help them develop positive thinking.


2009-08-21 12:34:20 補充：
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The monitoring and lighting systems fail to function properly as the poor rain proof causes proneness to short-circuit.