(急!!) English 改

2009-08-18 12:28 am
Blyton 's stories began to attract the wide audience. In the 1949 , Blyton published <<Little Noddy Goes toToyland>>.

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更新1:

但係wide audience個wide係adjective 我記得老師話adjective前要加 a/an/the 好似...................

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2009-08-18 1:09 am
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原句:Blyton 's stories began to attract the wide audience. In the 1949 , Blyton published <<Little Noddy Goes toToyland>>.

修改意見:
A) “wide audience” 泛指群眾,應不需要“the”。

B) 年份已是特別指定某一年,不需要 “the”。

修正後的句子為:
Blyton 's stories began to attract wide audience. In 1949 , Blyton published <<Little Noddy Goes toToyland>>.
參考: English Dictionary
2009-08-18 7:02 am
A wide audience
In 1949


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2009-08-18 15:59:18 補充:
I have added the article "a" there not because of the adjective. It is because audience is a countable singular noun.


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