請幫我睇下我篇英文日記可以點改

In the moRNING,I went to school and attendED my remedial ENGLISH class.I never think my English is good, so I must study hard to improve it.In fact,I can't speak much English, let alone write in English .It was very embarrassING when the girl sitting next to me asked me some questions about a few simple words but I couldn't solve her problems.

1) Be careful with your spelling

2) Pay attention to the tenses

3) My remedial English class<---------XXX English class

4) speak <----.... let alone WRITE<----

5) It is embarrassing when............... "embarrassed"is used to describe people.

I was so embarrassed.<---

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After I arrived home, I realized that I had missed the drama titled"Fated to love you".

I heard of it a long time ago but I have just started watching it recently.About the story, it is quite romaNtic and touching.I really like the characters- Xin Yi and Dylan.My mum likes it, too!Xin Yin is a very lucky girl who can always get help from others whenever she encounters difficulties.

It appears to me that she's changed her attitude towards bullies.
No one can bully her anymore.After she left her husband, she became tougher.

1) You mixed up the tenses!

2) After I arrived home,<======

After I back home<--------Wrong verb ! Wrong tense!

2009-08-13 01:39:11 補充：
5) It was embarrassing when............... "embarrassed"is used to describe people.*****

2009-08-13 01:44:11 補充：
Correction:


I heard of it a long time ago but I have just started watching it recently.About the story, it is quite romaNtic and touching. My mum and I both like it so much. Speaking of the characters, I really like Xin Yi and Dylan.***********

In the monring,I went to school and attended the English remedial class. I knew my English is very poor, so I must study hard to improve it. In fact,I cannot carry out simple conversations in English,let alone writing a complete and perfect acticle.It was very embarrassed that the girl sitting next to me had asked me some questions about vocabularies, but I couldn't provide her with an answer.

After I came home, I missed the time to see the drama called 'fated to love you'.I have heard this time long time ago, but I did not have the chance to start watching it.
The story is quite romatic. I really like the characters -Xin Yi and Dylan. My mum likes this drama too! Xin Yin is a very lucky girl because many people will help her if she encounters difficulties. She was appealing to me that she changed her attitude and was no longer be bullied easily. She became a stronger person after she left her husband.

In the monring,I went to school and attended the english remedial class.I knew that my english is very poor so I must study hard to improve it.In fact,I can't carry out simple conversations in english and write a complete and perfect english acticle.I was very embarrassed when the girl sitting next to me asked me some questions about english vocabularies but I couldn't answer her.

2009-08-12 22:07:06 補充：
I need more space so I have sent 2 mails to you
Hope you don't mind

I have read your diary. It is not too bad exceptyou have to do it once by pay attention to the tense.


In the monring,I went to school and attend the eng remedial class.I knew my eng is very poor so must study hard to improve it.In fact,I can't carry out simple conversation in English,
write a complete and perfect acticle. It was very embarrassed that the girl sitting next to me had asked me some (questions about = can delete) vocabularies but i couldn't answer her...
Hope you can try to finish the rest. You can improve your English by doing it once (one more time) by yourself.





2009-08-12 20:54:05 補充：
I went to school and attended....

I don't think your english isn't good , if you want your english be better , you should read more english books , see english newspaper or do more about english exercise !!