i am very busy today,i always has a lot of duty on monday,so i like go shopping and have dinner after get off work with friend,i spend 2 thousand for the clothes, thus my husband unsatisfy,i give my husband promise that i will not buy anything in this month.
我今日十分忙碌,我在星期一總是有很多工作,所以我放工後喜歡同朋友購物及食飯,我買衫用了二千元,導致我丈夫很不滿,我答應我丈夫在這個月內不會再買任何東西.
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2009-08-12 8:06 am
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2009-08-13 1:07 am
I am very busy today,I always has a lot of duties on monday,so I like to go shopping and have(唔系having,,因為唔會go having) dinner after finishing the work with friends,I spend two thousand on clothes, thus my husband is unsatisfied.Then,I give my husband a promise that I will buy nothing in this month (/I will not buy everything in this month-----唔系anything).
2009-08-12 8:48 am
I am very busy today. I always have a lot of duties on Monday, so i like to go shopping and have dinner with my friends after work. I spent two thousand dollars on the clothes, thus my husband is dissatisfied. I promise my husband that I won’t buy anything else this month.
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