Only then can we broaden our stock market, generating a virtuous circle of the more mainland enterprises we boast, the more will come to list here, and leaving our competitors behind.
Q1, In this sentance, can I change it to become "Only then can we broaden our stock market, generate a virtuous circle of the more mainland enterprises we boast, the more will come to list here, and leave our competitors behind."?
What is the problem if I changed it?
Thanks !!