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2009-08-06 3:19 am
中:我對我的前途感到憂慮,希望來年英文得到改善 。

英:My prospect.i feel so worry,i hope my english get improvement to next year.

我英文好差 最近努力學緊
希望有人可以解答我 如果錯左 講比我知錯左係邊 唔該
更新1:

仲有呢句 他工作負責盡職,但從來未獲得讚賞。 He is conscientious about him work,but he not obtained the praised about him.

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2009-08-06 4:37 am
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你的英文,有少少問題。
My prospect.i feel so worry
這句其實可以是一整句,不用被分成兩句。
可以這樣寫:
I feel so worried for my prospect.
worry 是動詞,可以作名詞用,但不可以作形容詞。
如果你要用 worry, 應該這樣寫:
I worry about my prospect so much.
如果我是你,我會用future 而不是prospect.
個人前途用future較為自然.
I worry about my future so much
Or
I am so worried for my prospect.

i hope my english get improvement to next year.
Since it is next year, you should use future tense.
you should add the word 'will' in front of get.
Also next is an adverb(副詞). There should be no preposition in front of an adverb.
Get improvement 並不常用,而且聽下去有點怪.建議你用have.

整句應是如此:
I hope my English will have improvement next year.
如果想意思更強,可以這樣寫:
I hope my English is going to have improvement next year.

2009-08-06 13:16:22 補充:
He is conscientious about him work,but he not obtained the praised about him.

第一,是his work ,不是him work
him 是object(賓語),後面不可以加noun.
要表達他的,應該用his 不是him.

he not obtained the praised about him.
否定句是不可以這樣的,
he 後面要加verb ,即是did.
加了did, obtain 又不用ed.

2009-08-06 13:16:28 補充:
用obtain太formal,建議你用receive.
用了receive, 就不用加about him了.
praised 是praise 是 past participle.
praise除了是verb ,亦是noun.
如果是從來未獲得,就最好用present perfect tense.

整句:
He is conscientious about his work,but he has never received any praise.
由於praise是uncountable noun,所以不用加_S

2009-08-06 13:17:31 補充:
由於yahoo常常補充失靈,我在這裡多打一次:
He is conscientious about him work,but he not obtained the praised about him.

第一,是his work ,不是him work
him 是object(賓語),後面不可以加noun.
要表達他的,應該用his 不是him.

he not obtained the praised about him.
否定句是不可以這樣的,
he 後面要加verb ,即是did.
加了did, obtain 又不用ed.

2009-08-06 13:17:39 補充:
用obtain太formal,建議你用receive.
用了receive, 就不用加about him了.
praised 是praise 是 past participle.
praise除了是verb ,亦是noun.
如果是從來未獲得,就最好用present perfect tense.

整句:
He is conscientious about his work,but he has never received any praise.
由於praise是uncountable noun,所以不用加_S


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