英文作文—毒品

我要作一篇英文ESSAY,,關於毒品既,,1共5段,,包括: Introduction, 3段Body, conclusion.

Topic: How teenagers in Hong Kong are affected by take drugs

PS.幫我改下呀,, plz...

以下係我既outline

Thesis statement: Drugs use among teens brings tragic effect to the student and future.

I. Topic sentence: One effect of take drugs is we will destroy our relationship between our families.
A.Parents feeling
1.Disappointed
2.upset
B.Destroy relationship
1.Steal things
2.Take money
II. Topic sentence: The external change of people’s body also is an effect by take drugs.
A.External look
1.Skin wet and cold
2.Skin rash
B.Behavior
1.Cannot sleep
2.Have illusion
III. Topic sentence: The internal change of personal health by take drugs.
A.Always use drugs
1.Hormone imbalance
2.Men sperm’s number decrease
3.Women’s period interference
B.Illness
1.Conjunctivitis
2.Kidney endamage
3.Faculty of memory decrease

PS. Thesis statement and Topic sentence 可以改的

以下係我既Introduction

When my mother was an 18 years old in high school, student drug use was unknown. Now currently students in Hong Kong take drugs a lot. The use of ecstasy, heroin and cocaine cause student and family suffering from it. Personally, I have witnessed some of my friends addicted to drugs. Drugs use among teens brings tragic effect to the student and future.

PS.可以改的

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