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I go to work at eight o'clock everyday. My work is very busy as I have to finish many jobs / tasks from nine to six o'clock by myself for the reason that my other colleagues are all on vacation. Therefore, I often feel tired and can't have lunch at home. However, I have never wanted to charge my job because my company offers me high salary and good welfare.

I go to work at eight o'clock everyday. I am always busy with my work,so I must finish a large amount of job from nine o'clock to six o'clock by myself. Because other colleagues are on vacation, I often feel tired. As a result, I can't have lunch at home. But I never want to change my work as my company offers high salary and good welfare for me.

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i go to work at eight o'clock everyday. My work is very busy, i must finish many duties from nine o'clock until six o'clock by myself as other colleague are on vacation,i feel tired always, thus I cannot have lunch at home. I have no intention to change my job because my company offers high salaries and good benefits for me.




2009-08-01 01:15:29 補充：
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i go to work at eight o'clock everyday,my work is very busy,i must finish many job from nine o'clock until six o'clock by myself,because other colleague be on vacation,i often feel tired,as a result,i can't have lunch at home.but i never want to charge my work,my campany offers high salary and good welfare for me.


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I go to work at eight o'clock everyday. I am very busy. I must finish many jobs from nine o'clock until six o'clock by myself,because other colleagues are on vacation. I often feel tired so that I can't have lunch at home.However I never want to change my work. That's becausemy campany offers high salary and good welfare for me.




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