i didn't go shopping last sunday,because my boyfriend and friendwent to work and visited her grandmother,i felt bored all day,i went for a walk with dog at 5:00,then i had dinner by myself after had shower,i went bed on 10:00 until this the morning.
我上個星期日沒有去逛街,因為我男朋友及朋友返了工及探她的祖父母,所以我感到很悶.我同我隻狗在5點去散步,之後在沖涼後自己一個人吃晚飯,我10點鐘去睡覺直到今朝早.
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2009-07-28 6:01 am
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2009-07-28 6:20 am
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...I wnet for a walk with MY dog......then I had dinner ALONE after HAVING A shower...
...I went TO bed AT 10:00 until this morning
大草字是加上或修改的字，同時應該在適當時候加多些
conjunctions,
eg: I felt bored all day, SO I went for a walk with my dog at 5:00...
邏輯上問題：男朋友探祖父，朋友與男朋友一起探誰的祖父，朋友探祖父（見到你寫“her / 她”）？
暫時是這樣...其他高手交流一下吧！我這是抛磚引玉...
參考: 自己(F7 高考生 UE: D)
2009-07-30 12:11 am
首先,,because前面唔使","
跟住,,my boyfriend and friend went to work and visited her grandmother後面要+1個字: respectively(分別地)
跟住,,I felt bored all day之前可以加"therefore",,意思會好1d
跟住,,5:00同10:00你完全冇講到系am定pm,,就好似我約你聽日5點系地鐵站等,,你唔講am定pm點得呢?
跟住果句成句應該改成:
then I had a dinner after bathing.
跟住,,系until next day.
(呢度就算你唔講今日,,人地睇左你上文都會知你指ge next day系今日)
跟住,,my boyfriend and friend went to work and visited her grandmother後面要+1個字: respectively(分別地)
跟住,,I felt bored all day之前可以加"therefore",,意思會好1d
跟住,,5:00同10:00你完全冇講到系am定pm,,就好似我約你聽日5點系地鐵站等,,你唔講am定pm點得呢?
跟住果句成句應該改成:
then I had a dinner after bathing.
跟住,,系until next day.
(呢度就算你唔講今日,,人地睇左你上文都會知你指ge next day系今日)
2009-07-28 6:10 am
i didn't go to shopping last sunday.
Because my boyfriend and friends went to work or visited their grandmother.
I felt bored all day, i went for a walk with my dog at 5:00, then i had dinner by myself. I went to bed at 10pm after the shower and sleep till next moring.
Because my boyfriend and friends went to work or visited their grandmother.
I felt bored all day, i went for a walk with my dog at 5:00, then i had dinner by myself. I went to bed at 10pm after the shower and sleep till next moring.
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