我當你係畀你寫gor個上司睇:
I am very glad to learn of the amount of attention you have given me. (我cut左discussion,覺得晤好聽). You have enlightened me with invaluable advice, showing me areas where I need to improve.(公事我又cut左, in english 晤係好am) Beside being my advicer at work, you also provide me with support and encouragement personally. With your continued support I will endeavour to keep learning and improving.