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In regards to your attached quotation, I would like to suggest upgrading the capacity of the hard disk from 80GB to 320GB as the share drive desktop needs a bigger capacity for data storage. The rest of the items on the quotation could remain unchanged.

2009-07-22 15:36:25 補充：
I highlighted the item to be uprade in the attached quotation.

OR

The item to be updated is highlighted in the attached quotation.

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With regard to your attached quotation. I intended only to mention Hard disk upgrade from 80G to 320GB in the attached on the Quotation. Because department share drive desktop more storage to save data. Other unchanged.

I would suggest that you should let me upgrade your
hard disc capacity from 80G to 320G regarding your attached quotation.

According to my analysis, your shared drive will need more space to store data. The rest of the hardware will then remain unchanged.

We call it "a SHARED drive".


A share(verb)(noun) drive<------------MISTAKE!!!

2009-07-22 17:38:49 補充：
updrade item 我 巳 highlight 在 attached qutation .


Please note that there are highlighted items for upgrade purposes on the attached quotation.

2009-07-22 17:46:00 補充：
[PDF] REQUEST FOR QUOTATION
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Warranty shall be described on the attached Quotation Form. The location. of all warranty work shall be specified in detail on the attached Quotation Form. ...dpscs.state.md.us/publicservs/procurement/.../2007-DATA_CENTER_RFQ.pdf

2009-07-22 17:46:41 補充：
We should be "ON" in the sentence!!

2009-07-22 17:52:24 補充：
We should USE "on" in the sentence!!***********

2009-07-22 17:53:45 補充：
Please note that the items for upgrade purposes have been highlighted on the attached quotation.