英文作文.....250words (20分)

2009-07-21 12:30 am
題目: Write an article for your school newspaper about the dangers of gambling.



小弟自問英文能力弱....諗左好耐都唔知點作
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回答 (2)

2009-07-21 1:11 am
✔ 最佳答案
我諗幫你作就唔得喇,,幫下你諗就得,,以下果d字唔系深字,,系中二應該要識得ge字:
首先,,你要有"introduction"
Introduction:
你可以用呢句開頭:
Nowadays the problem of gambling is getting more and more serious among teenagers.(現今青少年賭博的問題愈來愈嚴重.)
你可以用某d字去作埋個開頭:
- Mark Six (六合彩)
- Gamble heavily on the horses (賭馬)
- Gambler (賭錢個個人)
- immersurable harm (不能估計的害處)
- far-reaching influence (深遠影響)

跟住最好就系個body,,你可以諗下d points!=]:
例如:
1.It is a waste of money.(浪費金錢)
2.It may change one's attitude.(改變態度)
第2呢個即系:
如果一個人賭得多,,佢就會覺得樣樣野都唔使付出努力就可以得到,,令到佢唔努力.
- Effort (努力)
- Without effort,....(唔使努力之下,......)
- Devote much time to ...(+ing) (投放好多時間在...)
如: devote much time to gambling.
3.Become an gamble addict.(成賭癮者)

以上ge point 你慢慢諗下點樣去展開佢,,令到佢變成一個paragraph.

最後系Conclusion:
你可以講番一d解決方法同埋一d正面信息,,如
hold talks (搞講坐)
advertisement (宣傅)
stricter law (更嚴厲立法)
等等

希望幫到你
2009-07-22 8:38 pm
Gambling addiction, as social evil, is similar to smoking, alcohol and drug addiction.

It is a stigma on the society and a crime against humanity. Such an addiction may also result in family disunion.

It separates the gambling addicts from their beloved ones, leaving behind each member of a family in despair and trouble. It destroys our life in particular and causes trouble to the society in general.


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