Movie Tltle:Notting Hill
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(1)The film 'Notting Hill' is a romantic comedy.This film 'Notting Hill' stars Julia Roberts and Hugh Grant.Julia Rpberts portrays.Anna and Hugh Grant portrays William Thacker in the film.The film portrayal between an arerage Englishman and a Hollywood Superstar in love story.
William Thacker is a boss in travel bookshop and Anna is a Hollywood Superstar ,they were first recognize is in the travel bookshop , William wants to love with Anna .Then they were began developed relationship . William Thacker actively invites Anna to his young sister's brithday party , and introduce Anna to his family are recognice .William in love with Anna,they are watched movie and kissed in the park .That's very romantic .But Anna has a boyfriend , William knows she has a boyfriend and he was sorrowful leave to Anna . then Anna once again hope William can love her . So , they are newly in love , and Anna lives in William's home , because Anna was very fear to face to face reporters . William's friend focus a group of reporters , therefore , Anna was crazy , she was determination to leave to his home .He was compunction . And then they are end of their love .
Over half a year , Anna was still love to William , Anna was still love for William , she cames to his travel bookshop say''You can love me?,but William say''No'',So,Anna was leave , William knows himself chose wrong ,and he hope Anna leave London before said ''I love you'' to Anna . At the last ,They are once more to be deeply attached to each other(相親相愛)
(2)I finished this movie , I thought this is a very good movie . because this movie has romantic plot . I was deeply affected by the romantic plot .And i like William take a car pursued Anna plot , it was very funny when he meets troublesome matter , he friend Spike could their car pursue to Anna reporter conference .I like this movie.
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2009-07-19 4:00 am
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2009-07-19 5:21 am
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'Notting Hill'is a romantic comedy, starring Hugh Grant and Julia Roberts. Julia Roberts and Hugh Grant portray Anna and William Thacker respectively. William Thacker was a boss in a travel bookshop and Anna was a Hollywood Superstar. Their first encounter took place in the travel bookshop. William loved Anna at the point he got sight of her. Then their relationship started to develop. William Thacker actively invited Anna to his young sister's birthday party. In fact, he introduced Anna to his family. After some dates, Anna was in love with William. One day, they watched movie and kissed in the park. Nevertheless, Anna had a boy friend. William discovered the fact and left Anna sorrowfully. But, Anna still hoped that William could love her. After some events, they were once again in love. Since Anna was not willing to confront the reporter, she chose to live in William's house. Unexpectedly, William's friend gathered a group of reporters. Since the relationship between Anna and William was exposed, Anna was furious and was determined to leave William's house. William was compunctious. It seems to be the end of their love.Half a year later, Anna still loved William. Therefore, she went to his travel bookshop and asked whether William loved her. However, William's answer was NO. So, Anna left. Later on, William knew he had made a wrong choice, so before Anna left, he bravely express his love to Anna. Ultimately, they fall in love with each other.
(2)After I finished the movie, I thought it is fantastic. At several moments I was touched by the romantic plot. Also, there are some funny scenes. For instance, I couldn't help laughing when William took a car to pursue Anna, because it is very comical when he met the troublesome matter. Anyway, I think the movie worth seeing.
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2009-07-19 4:24 am
Here is the edition. Might need to change the past and present tense. hope it's useful. need to avoid 'saying things twice'.
The film 'Notting Hill' is a romantic comedy. In the film main characters are Anna,the Holywood superstar and William Thacker, an average Englishman. The roles are acted by Julia Roberts and Hugh Grant.
William Thacker is a boss of a travel book shop and Anna is a Hollywood Superstar. They met in the shop and William fell in love with Anna instantly. As the story develops, William invited Anna to his younger sister's brithday party. They watched movie and kissed in the park .That's very romantic. But Anna has a boyfriend , William knows that. He was unwilling to let Anna go. Then Anna returned and they were in love again. Anna moved in with William but it was a disaster. They were swamped by reporters and that was ended the relationship.
Half a year passed by and Anna was still love with William. She wents to his shop and said: ''You can love me?". But William fired back a ''No''. Of course, William realised that he made a mistake. So the two are finally together.
2) I think this is a very good movie because it has a wonderful plot . I was deeply moved by the couple's romance. And i like the way that William jumped on the car in order to pursue Anna. It was very funny when he meets troublesome matter. His friend Spike ?? (not sure about this part)could their car pursue to Anna reporter conference .I like this movie.
The film 'Notting Hill' is a romantic comedy. In the film main characters are Anna,the Holywood superstar and William Thacker, an average Englishman. The roles are acted by Julia Roberts and Hugh Grant.
William Thacker is a boss of a travel book shop and Anna is a Hollywood Superstar. They met in the shop and William fell in love with Anna instantly. As the story develops, William invited Anna to his younger sister's brithday party. They watched movie and kissed in the park .That's very romantic. But Anna has a boyfriend , William knows that. He was unwilling to let Anna go. Then Anna returned and they were in love again. Anna moved in with William but it was a disaster. They were swamped by reporters and that was ended the relationship.
Half a year passed by and Anna was still love with William. She wents to his shop and said: ''You can love me?". But William fired back a ''No''. Of course, William realised that he made a mistake. So the two are finally together.
2) I think this is a very good movie because it has a wonderful plot . I was deeply moved by the couple's romance. And i like the way that William jumped on the car in order to pursue Anna. It was very funny when he meets troublesome matter. His friend Spike ?? (not sure about this part)could their car pursue to Anna reporter conference .I like this movie.
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