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2009-07-14 7:32 am
he works in bank, my brother is a gentleman ,he often give the gift for girl,so many girl love him,but he never give me the gift.他於銀行工作,他是一個很有風度的人,他經常送禮物給女仔,所以好多女仔喜歡他,但他重來都不送禮物給我.

it is a unfriendly dog,it is My neightbor gave it for me about 13 years ago when it was a baby,牠屬於老狗 ,so it walks is very slowly.牠陪了我很多童年時間.
牠是一隻很不友善的狗,牠是鄰居於13年前給我的,牠屬於老狗 ,所以行路已經很慢.牠陪了我很多童年時間.

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2009-07-14 9:14 am
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He works in a bank, and he is a gentleman. He always gives gifts to the girls, therefore many girls like him. However, he never give me any gifts.

It is an unfriendly dog. My neighbor gave it to me about 13 years ago when it was a baby ,so it walks very slowly. I spent most of my childhood time with the dog.
2009-07-17 8:42 am
My brother is (He) working in a bank. He is a gentleman and often gives gifts to girls. Therefore, many girls like him very much. However, he had never given me a gift.

My dog is unfriendly. My neighbor gave it (him/her) to me about 13 years ago when he (she) is a baby. My dog is a slow walker because he (she) is now very old. [Since my dog is now quite old, he (she) walks very slow.] He (She) was being (accompanying) with me all the times during my childhood.
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2009-07-14 11:42 pm
He works in a bank,he is a gentleman ,he often gives gifts to girls,so many girls like him,but he never gives me any gift.

It is a unfriendly dog,it is my neightbor gave it to me about 13 years ago when it was a old dog ,so it walks is very slowly.However, it spend years with my childhood time


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