請幫我改英文句子,好簡單的

我爸爸於大陸工作,他居住香港的時間很小,但他每星期都會回家一次,他經常對我說,他年輕時很英俊,雖然我唔認同,但我好多親戚都說他英俊.

My father has to work in China, so he doesn't spend much time in Hong Kong. Gladly, he comes home at least once a week. He often tells me how handsome he was when he was young. Although I dont think so, many of my relatives say that he is a handsome man.
I am sorry to inform you that you have made lots of mistakes in this short paragraph.
I suggest you hire an English tutor for your studies.
Good luck!
Although ( no "but")

2009-07-14 11:49:30 補充：
Gladly, he comes home once a week.*********

2009-07-14 11:49:42 補充：
Gladly, he comes home once a week.*********

My father works in China. He spends very little time in HK. He comes home one day per week. My father often tells me that he was a very handsome when he was young. Although I don't thinks so, many of my relatives do say that he is a handsome man.

2009-07-13 23:36:48 補充：
Please take out the "a" from the sentence, it should read:

My father often tells me he was very handsome when he was young.

My father works in China and only comes back home in Hong Kong once a week. My father always told me that he was handsome when he was young, although I don't think so (or I don't agree), but many of my relatives do said that he is handsome.