錯漏百出的英文作文

1) Recently the Hong Kong government has implemented an Environmental Levy Scheme on Plastic Shopping Bags. If you want to get a plastic bag to put goods such as food or drink, medicine or first-aid item and personal hygiene or beauty product, you need to pay 50 cents as environmental levy. Most Hong Kong people support this policy because it provides a better environment for their future generation. At least my family supports this policy.


2) Some people may think that the policy will bring inconvenience to them, while this is totally wrong. Before the implementation of the policy, you may not bring a recycle bag with you for shopping. As a result, you may need to hold more than ten plastic bags each time when you shop. Do you think holding more than ten plastic bags is convenient? The answer is absolutely not. After the implementation of the new policy, most people will bring a recycle bag to save money for the levy. We can put all our purchases in one bag. This policy actually makes it more convenience for you than before, and it brings more good than harm!


3) After the Environmental Levy Scheme on Plastic Shopping Bags has commenced, it is estimated that the number of plastic bags to be transferred to landfill will reduce significantly. This can definitely help solving pollution problems in Hong Kong . As we all know, each plastic bag needs many years to decompose under the ground, and it leads to land contamination problem. In the meantime, countries using incinerators to handle plastic bags prove that many toxic substances are released during the process and cause air pollution and greenhouse effect. Lastly, a huge amount of water is needed to produce plastic bags. The exhausted water passes into rivers and cause water pollution. Therefore, using recycle bag can help reducing a lot of pollution problems in Hong Kong .

4) This policy also helps the public raising their consciousness on their environment.

2009-07-13 08:10:14 補充：
Propagandas and promotion programmes from the Government enlighten the public to understand the worsening environment in Hong Kong.

2009-07-13 08:10:47 補充：
Many people and companies begin to save water and electricity to help saving our environment. Cite for an example, my family starts sorting waste and turn on the air-conditioner only when outside temperature has reached 25.5 degree Celsius.

2009-07-13 08:11:10 補充：
Although it seems we can only contribute a little to save the environment, the actual fact is that every small contribution we make will help providing a better condition for our future generation.

2009-07-13 08:11:33 補充：
5) All in all, the Environmental Levy Scheme on Plastic Shopping Bags does more good than harm for our environment.

2009-07-13 08:11:55 補充：
The policy is not bringing us inconvenience but on the contrary helping us to reduce pollution problems in Hong Kong. Most importantly, it increases the public awareness on protecting our environment.

2009-07-13 08:12:19 補充：
From now on, please don’t forget to bring your recycle bag for shopping!

完全唔知你地講乜
我既英文實在太差啦
所以我唔投票啦

4)第1句錯清-.-
應該系:
The policy helps raise the awareness of protecting environment among the public.
第2句冇咁錯,,你應該改成:
some try to bring environmental protection bags to save money and protect the environment.
因為public唔會自己帶袋,,系人帶袋,,仲有bag要加s,,因為有好多人帶袋,,唔系只系帶一個.
第3句,,系The Government,,仲有,,系helps,,要加s.
第4句唔要to save our environment,,意思太重複.
第5句,,應該系turn on the air-conditioner to 25.5 degree Celsius.
until 系 直到
第6句應該改成咁:
Although we can just do a little to save the environment, we must try our best to provide a good living condition for our posterity.
5)
第1句:系does ...to our environment
第2句:系pollution,,唔要the,,唔要s
第3句,,一開始你可以講 "Most importantly,",,跟住你就要話
raise the awareness of the public
第4句,,系After the moment,,唔系this
英文得兩個:
1系 that moment (過去),, 1系 the moment(現在)
save our environment 唔系 out
仲有子孫冇得save,,唔該delete左佢.

你篇文有好多double meaning,,呢個系令到你篇文衰ge一樣最重要野,,下次都可以搵我幫手=):
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I do not know what your school level is. In general, your essay is not too bad, I have rewritten it to make it more readable (compare it to your own, hope it helps):

1)The plastic bag levy comes into effect in HK recently. You are charged 50 cents if you want to get a plastic bag for your purchases at certain stores. Most people in Hong Kong support this policy because this can help the environment for our posterity. My family is supporting this policy.

2)Some people may think that the policy brings inconvenience, this is totally wrong. Before the implemetation of this levy, you may not take a recycleable bag for shopping and may use more than ten plastic bags for each trip. That was not too convenient, was it? Now most people will take a recycleable bag to save money and put all their purchases in one big bag. That is what we call convenient! So, you see, this levey does bring more good than harm.

3)It is believed that the number of plastic bags transferred to the landfills will definitely be reduced with the new levy. This can certainly help to reduce the pollution problems in hong kong. Plastic bags need many years to decompose, this brings serious land pollution. Some countries incinerate the plastic bags, emitting many toxic substances into the environment in the process , contributing to air pollution and greenhouse effect. Further more, water is used during the plastic bag manufacturing process, that puts pressure on our water resources and may further pollute our reivers and oceans.



(SORRY, CAN ONLY GIVE YOU THE FIRST 3 PARAGRAPHS, SYSTEM DOES NOT ALLOW TOO MANY WORDS .)