Dear Principal Ho
I am XXX. I am a F.3 student of X X X Secondary School (Tuen Mun) now. I find that the teaching way in my school is not very suitable for me. I do hope you to give me a chance to study at your school. Let me develop my professional specialty.
Also once visited the open day of your school, the guiding principle for running a school to your school was known very much, not only focus on students study but also give consideration to students in extracurricular development. In this year, I often inquire about the materials of your school on the net, asking about the situation of having a class to students of your school, they behave very happily, full of very happy smiles especially on one.
The attitude that I teach to the environment, facility and teachers in your school conscientiously is appreciated very much. After put down with my parents, we is it is it join a class in the middle of the course the letter of application for enrollment in a school to submit to your school to determine unanimously. We are sure that there is good education, could serve society to lay a solid foundation in the future for me. So specially write to the headmaster, I wish to administrate the high-quality education and have an opportunity to attend your school, become a one share of your school, enable me to tide over a happy campus life.
My rude place, please excuse me!
Wish all teachers and students in your school have good health, live a happy life
Yours sincerely
XXX
轉校信(Eg) 幫我睇下有冇錯 急~thx
2009-07-02 2:38 am
回答 (4)
2009-07-02 3:09 am
✔ 最佳答案
你好!都可以的
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沒甚麼問題!!!
祝你成功轉校!!
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中文版本:
親愛的主要Ho
我是XXX。 我現在是X X x中學(Tuen Mun)的F.3學生。 我發現教的方式在我的學校為我不是非常適當的。 我希望您給我機會學習在您的學校。 讓我開發我的專業專業。
並且在學生在業餘發展曾經參觀了開放天您的學校，指導原則為管理學校到您的學校非常被知道，不僅焦點學習，而且考慮學生。 在今年，我在網經常詢問關於您的學校材料，詢問情況有類對您的學校的學生，他們非常愉快地表現，充分非常愉快的微笑特別是在一个。
我在您的學校教對環境、設施和老師純謹的態度被讚賞非常。 在放下以後與我的父母，我們是它是它在路線中間參加類申請書為註冊在學校遞交給您的學校一致同意確定。 我們是肯定的有好教育，可能服務社會在將來打一個固定基礎為我。 給校長那麼特別地寫，我希望管理優質教育，并且有機會上您的學校，成為您的學校一個一個份額，使能我到浪潮在愉快的校園生活。
我粗魯的地方，請劳驾!
祝願所有老師和學生在您的學校有身體好，居住一愉快的生活
敬上
XXX
2009-07-01 19:34:10 補充：
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$1.4
2009-07-01 19:34:20 補充：
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$1.4郵票一張
2009-07-04 3:58 am
第一段,I find that the teaching way in my school is not very suitable for me.(very呢個字,最好唔好寫)
I do hope you to give me a chance to study at your school. (hope+n+inf.---to可以delete)
第二段:
principle?(最好講埋個名,例如Mr/miss chan)
My rude place, please excuse me! (我粗魯的地方，請劳驾! )
我唔知佢係唔係明封信講d咩?一個識英文既人,無可能會諗到咁既中文出來!
正常解釋係(我無禮的地方,請原諒我!)
講真,呢句表面上可以表達禮貌,但同時都表現在係對自己寫封信無信心!我就唔建議你寫!
最後,你應該delete左呢個問題!試問如果比你想轉果間學校見到你封信,會點樣諗?
I do hope you to give me a chance to study at your school. (hope+n+inf.---to可以delete)
第二段:
principle?(最好講埋個名,例如Mr/miss chan)
My rude place, please excuse me! (我粗魯的地方，請劳驾! )
我唔知佢係唔係明封信講d咩?一個識英文既人,無可能會諗到咁既中文出來!
正常解釋係(我無禮的地方,請原諒我!)
講真,呢句表面上可以表達禮貌,但同時都表現在係對自己寫封信無信心!我就唔建議你寫!
最後,你應該delete左呢個問題!試問如果比你想轉果間學校見到你封信,會點樣諗?
2009-07-03 7:04 am
2009-07-02 9:18 am
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Re: School transfer
Dear Principal Ho,
I am XXX. I am a F.3 student of X X X Secondary School (Tuen Mun) now. I find that the teaching way in my school is not very suitable for me. I do hope that you will give me a chance to study at your school. Let me develop my professional specialty in the following paragraphs..
At the open day of your school, the guiding principle for running a school was well-known. It does not only focus on the study of the students, but also give consideration to the area of extracurricular development. In this year, I often inquire about the materials of your school on the Internet, asking about the situation of having a class to be a student of your school. They behave very joyfully and full of happy smiles.
The attitude that I observed from the environment, the facility, and the teachers in your school is very much appreciated. After a discussion with my parents, we all agreed that joining your school is a wise choice. They all suggested me to submit a letter of enrollment application to your school.
We are sure that there will be excellent education which I can establish a solid foundation in the future. I sincerely wish to administrate the high-quality education and have an opportunity to attend your school, become a share of your school, enable me to tide over a happy campus life.
My rude place, please excuse me!
Wish all teachers and students in your school have good health and a happy life
Yours sincerely
XXX
2009-07-02 01:20:13 補充：
Envelope should write : Dear Principal Ho
Present
Date
Re: School transfer
Dear Principal Ho,
I am XXX. I am a F.3 student of X X X Secondary School (Tuen Mun) now. I find that the teaching way in my school is not very suitable for me. I do hope that you will give me a chance to study at your school. Let me develop my professional specialty in the following paragraphs..
At the open day of your school, the guiding principle for running a school was well-known. It does not only focus on the study of the students, but also give consideration to the area of extracurricular development. In this year, I often inquire about the materials of your school on the Internet, asking about the situation of having a class to be a student of your school. They behave very joyfully and full of happy smiles.
The attitude that I observed from the environment, the facility, and the teachers in your school is very much appreciated. After a discussion with my parents, we all agreed that joining your school is a wise choice. They all suggested me to submit a letter of enrollment application to your school.
We are sure that there will be excellent education which I can establish a solid foundation in the future. I sincerely wish to administrate the high-quality education and have an opportunity to attend your school, become a share of your school, enable me to tide over a happy campus life.
My rude place, please excuse me!
Wish all teachers and students in your school have good health and a happy life
Yours sincerely
XXX
2009-07-02 01:20:13 補充：
Envelope should write : Dear Principal Ho
Present
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