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2009-06-25 8:47 am
1.My life is entirely given up to my mum,dad and my pet dog.
2.We bought a lot of shorts,skirts and T-shirts against the coming winter.
3.The spider is weaving web under the wardrobe.
4.He died of a brain failure.
5.A sun arose from a mountain.
6.The football team had a string of victories last lesson.
7.My wish to become a choregrapher was finally realized.
8.The Japanese invaded China in 1937.
9.The detective traced the suspect.
10.The principal toid the childred to sit in a row.
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If I have mistakes,please give me the explanatiom

回答 (2)

2009-06-26 2:08 am
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你好,请看以下的解答咯。

1) 我觉得应该是 My life is entirely given up to my mum, my dad (or my parents) and my dog. 的,可是我不确定是否可以用 give up to 的。

2) 其实 We bought a lot of shorts, skirts and T-shirts against the coming winter. 里用的 against 是对的,可是那些 shorts、skirts 跟 T-shirts 可以预防或防备即将来临的冬季吗?

3) 我觉得应该是 The spider is weaving a web under / in the wardrobe. 的,可是我不知道你所说的衣橱是否摆放得高不高,如果摆在地上而又没有缝口的话,那你应该用 in 会比较适当的咯。

4) He died of a brain failure. 是正确的。

5) 我觉得应该是 The sun arises / come out / has arisen / has come out from the mountain. 的,因为太阳只有一个而已,所以我们要用 The sun 的。

6) 大致上都是对的,唯有 last lesson 咯,为什么你会用 lesson 的呢?如果用 season 或其它的会比较好的咯。

7) My wish to become a choreographer was finally realized. — 只是写错 choregrapher 而已。

8) The Japanese invaded China in 1937. 是正确的。

9) The detective traced the suspect. 是正确的。

10) The principal told the childred to sit in a row. — 只是写错 toid 而已。

希望能帮到你咯。。。: )
2009-06-25 8:59 am
1.My life is entirely given up to my mum, my dad and my dog.
2.We bought a lot of shorts, skirts and T-shirts for the coming winter.
3.The spider is weaving web under the wardrobe.
4.He died of a brain failure.
5.A sun arose from a mountain.
6.The football team had a string of victories last lesson.
7.My wish to become a choregrapher was finally achieved.
8.The Japanese invaded China in 1937.
9.The detective traced the suspect.
10.The principal told the childred to sit in a row.


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