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Book Review:

This story is about Franny, Igor and the cupid. Franny was a mad
scientists.Franny's mom said every mad scientist needs a lab assistant.So at Valentine's Day, Franny 's mom gave Franny a dog that called
Igor as Franny lab assistant. However, Franny didn't want to let her
mom down so she pretened she loved it.

Every times Igor couldn't wait to help her but he made things worse
and worse. After few days that is Valentine's day, Franny needed to
make a card for everyone but Franny was tried so she went to bed.
Igor wanted to help her. Careless,he switch on Franny's Manifester
and Franny's gizmos.A giant size cupid went out and was happily
firing his arrows in all directions.Franny was angry. She punished
Igor. She had to stopped the cupid. She turned the Biggerizer on
herself.she dropped down. Cupid pulled back on the arrow and
again took aim to Franny.This looked like the end.Suddenly Igor
used his pointy teeth sank into the cupid butt.He had saved Franny.
The cupid snatched Igor off and threw him to the ground.He pulled
back on the biggest arrow and took aim to Igor.
Franny was thankful and sorry. She had to save Igor. She used
the Manifester in reverse and returned him to the paper.They were
safe.Franny was happy that she had a smart dog. Finally, they made
the Valentine's card together.
B.

I like this book. It was funny. It made me laugh when I am
reading this book. I like chapter seventeen best. It was exciting.There
were no chapter I hate. All chapter are interesting.
I love the pictures in the book.It was cute.I think Igor was silly and
lovely.I like Franny, she was clever, although she was full of strange
things in her brain but she was pretty.
In this book, I learnt we should love our pets.Don't regard them is
a toy, we should take care them.
I would recommed this book to my friend and classmate.