請幫手改改個cover letter~^^~

首先回答您的問題:

1.我係咪應該加多少少公司background? 即係每封都會唔同!咁係咪第一段講?
答: 好既求職信當然要根據不同公司要求, 所以每封都有d唔同. 而第一段當然列明你申請職位 (因為同一家公司可能會找不同申請職位)


2. 我想搵份lab testing 的工,不過我上年summer只係lab入面做reporting,同testing冇咩關...只係間做testing的公司,咁我講唔講好?
答: 當然要講 (但可以技巧講). 有經驗總好比過沒有經驗, 即使reporting不是同testing有咩關, 但你可令公司知道你對 lab reporting 有經驗 (這反而是你的優勢,而其他人沒有)


3. 我係sd email apply的,咁我洗唔洗寫地址同日期ar?
答: 唔洗, 因為您的電郵已經有日期.


4. 我sd email係咪只係附件依封信同埋resume?定係唔洗resume?定係將封信打係email寫信o個到ar?
答: Cover letter (依封信可係封信打,即係email裡面), 然後附件resume係email.


因為我係網上搵到好多個寫法,如果可以的話...幫我改一改!
答: ***不需要寫‘subject’在email 裡面, 但用作email subject


Email Subject: Re: Application for Chemical Junior Technician (Laboratory)
(JDB ref no: JD05/CT/P7)

2009-06-22 20:04:33 補充：
打係email裡面:

Dear Sir/Madam:

I am writing in response to your advertisement in JobsDB for the position of Chemical Junior Technician (Laboratory) advertised on 27th May 2009.

2009-06-22 20:04:39 補充：
“第一段OR” {I am writing to apply the position of Chemical Junior Technician within your company. Enclosed please find my resume with summary of my experiences for your consideration.}

2009-06-22 20:06:28 補充：
As you will find in my resume, I graduated from Hong Kong Institute of Vocational Education (Chai Wan) with earning a Higher Diploma in xxxx in June 200x. I worked as a Contract Summer Trainee at SGS Hong Kong Limited in the summer of 2008.

2009-06-22 20:09:16 補充：
The main duties of this job were included data entry, laboratory reporting, and responsible for variety of administrative works. Throughout this job, I gained knowledge on providing prompt assistants and supports to others as well as learnt how to get along well with other colleagues.

2009-06-22 20:10:33 補充：
During my studies, I demonstrated strong research skills in works with experienced in working well in a team-work environment. In addition, I am able to take responsibility for my own as well as demonstrate leadership when is required.

2009-06-22 20:10:37 補充：
Combined with my enthusiasm to learn, I am confident that these said attributes will bring me to excellence and make significant contribution to Intertek.

2009-06-22 20:10:55 補充：
Enclosed please find my resume, which provides details of my qualifications for the position. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my interest and qualifications. I can be reached at 9xxx xxxx any time. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

2009-06-22 20:11:21 補充：
Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,
xxx xxx xxx (Your name)

Enclosure

Notes: 括號是給你另一選擇

2009-06-22 20:14:04 補充：
不好意思,字數太多,要分幾次post.

1. You don’t have to say too much background in your cover letter. Those are detailed in your resume.
2. If it’s the same industry, you can mention it.
3. Date should be written on your cover letter, and your address should be on the top of your resume.
4. Normally an attachment is better.

Your cover letter is very good, so I only made a few corrections.

Dear Sir/Madam,

Re: Application for the Position of [Chemical Junior Technician (Laboratory)]
(JDB ref no: JD05/CT/P7)

I am writing in response to your advertisement in JobsDB for the position of Chemical Junior Technician (Laboratory) posted on 27th May 2009.

I graduated from Hong Kong Institute of Vocational Education (Chai Wan) majoring in XX which will earn me a Higher Diploma in June. I worked as a Contract Summer Trainee at SGS Hong Kong Limited in the summer of 2008. My main duties included daily laboratory report data entry and administrative work. I am always helpful and am a real team player.


During my studies, I demonstrated strong research skills in project works and much of the experiences had been within a team environment. I am able to take responsibility for my own as well as demonstrate leadership when required. I am confident that these attributes, combined with my enthusiasm to learn, will bring commitment to excellence and energy to Intertek.

Enclosed is my resume, which provides details of my qualifications for the position. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my interest and qualifications. I can be reached at 9xxx xxxx at any time. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Thank you for your time and consideration.


Yours sincerely,
(sign)
xxx xxx xxx (full name)

Enclosure